Debbie Duncan Poet Free verse

The Dancer

Blurry thoughts render vague rambling words
You know the feelings you want to convey
As you feel the seasons and the powers
Which they provide to those who live in her embrace
As you travel the spiraling wheel ~ through 
To cosmic consciousness ~ you become 
The dancer on top of the world for 
All to see!!!



6 29   2011

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Daver Austin June 1, 2015 at 11:43 AM Yes! I've been dancing on the wheel, but now I must cane slowly along. I can still use and hear my mantra though, still leave the flesh behind and dance in the cosmic consciousness. Love this poem. LOve, daver

Michelle Mac Donald February 26, 2015 at 5:46 AM Feels as though one enters the "cosmic consciousness", with this phenomenal write, Debbie. Totally inspiring; choosing muses as partners dancing to "the seasons, the powers". lately I think that I've been dancing too often with time. Not really a cosmic entity.:( Keep well, love, Mikki

Matthew Anish January 18, 2015 at 11:10 PM Is the spiraling wheel the cosmic wheel? Hope you keep writing and thank you for your kinds words. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich December 31, 2014 at 1:23 AM NIce hearing from you today and still waiting for some new poetry from you!!

Poet Destroyer A June 8, 2014 at 7:15 PM A beautiful write indeed, Debbie, a cheerful feeling.. Fun imagery... Linda

Don Johnson May 28, 2014 at 12:41 AM swirling mist of mind, creates words in ryhthmic time, from concious coast 2 coast, great words i find, poetic friend of mine:}

James Kelley April 27, 2014 at 10:37 PM Very imaginative, I like this a lot

Andrea Dietrich April 26, 2014 at 9:52 AM Hi, Debbie. I am off on a little trip and just wanted to stop and say bye for a bit. I was not able to find a poem to post a comment for. hoping you will give us a new one. Why not try your hand at a Quatern?

Duke Beaufort April 20, 2014 at 10:15 AM Debbie, I wish the best for you as well. Have a wonderful holiday, spring and year. Keep smiling! You have something wonderful going for you. Debbie Duncan April 21, 2014 at 11:54 AM Thank you Duke :)

Phyllis Babcock April 19, 2014 at 10:49 AM That is where i want to be on top of the world dancing. Awesome words. love phyl

Ajeyemi Wasiu Ajewumi April 19, 2014 at 10:28 AM Beautiful!

Michelle Mac Donald April 18, 2014 at 11:48 AM Love this write, Debbie! It feels deep, formal, though at the same time there is a wildness and abandon. Have nice Good Friday...and a Happy Easter. (),,(). Keep well and stay happy. Mikki

Carolyn Devonshire April 17, 2014 at 9:11 AM Dear Debbie, Wow! Love the poem, especially the image of a "cosmic consciousness" you created with your dancer. Awesome. Best wishes for a Happy Easter, Carolyn

Robert Andrew Lyle April 17, 2014 at 2:31 AM What a beautiful piece Debbie I am spinning as I read it and want to savour it again and again. Thank you for sharing this performance with us. Andy

Andrea Dietrich April 16, 2014 at 8:42 PM oops sorry about the name thing. I am always messing up my students' names too.

Sara Kendrick April 16, 2014 at 2:18 PM Very expressive work that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen April 16, 2014 at 11:49 AM - Hey Debbie - I will wish you a happy Easter - Hope all is well with you! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Sergi April 14, 2014 at 6:15 PM Hi Debbie, Nice to know you. I read each sentence several times to savor each word. Beautiful metaphorical prose. Thank you for your comment on my Ode tp the Nederland. A fantastic country of my youth.

Arthur Vaso April 13, 2014 at 9:50 PM Enchanting, loved this gem of a poem!

Jeremy Street April 13, 2014 at 6:18 PM Just A Note: Two Beautiful Favourites; In Priceless *:*(*

Jeremy Street April 13, 2014 at 6:14 PM Tis Nay A Surprise This Beauty In Her Design...Lovely She And She Knows ? I Can Find Her Compelling Beauty There; So Captivating, As Fragrant Her Creation...Dance Baby Girl, Dance....Love, Jeremy

Joseph Sergi April 13, 2014 at 5:33 PM Debbie a wonderful work thanks for sharing!

Jack Horne April 12, 2014 at 3:42 PM aww, lovely write : )

Cecilia Macfarlane April 9, 2014 at 7:11 PM And a star is born! Terrific write Debbie! Hugs

Andrea Dietrich April 7, 2014 at 11:48 PM Debbie, you asked how I was. I was gone three days and am not trying to catch up on a lot of comments. I hope to see more and more of you. Put up some poems!! there are so many contests and I hope they will inspire you, my friend.

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