The Dancer

It started with the castanets, the fiddler chiming in
He had the sweetest melody, the fiddle by his chin

Suddenly, her face appeared, through mist, between the trees
The crowd stood silently because, the dancer came to please

Her long, dark hair was wild and free, her eyes were dark as night
Her body was a sight to see, so tanned and svelte and light

She leaped around the roaring fire, her graceful movements slow
The firelight inside her eyes, announced another show

The yellow flames licked at her feet, she teased them with her dance
And with the shimmer of her veils, they all fell in a trance

The people swayed from side to side, hypnotically, they fell
A hazy look was in their eyes, caught in the dancer’s spell

They swooned together with the beat, their motion was as one
And they would only be released, the time the dance was done

Soon the fiddler slowed his beat, the dancer’s steps complied
Each movement taken gingerly, she let the fiddle guide

And then she pranced into the woods, the music led the way
Until the time she would return, to dance another day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Makama Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 4:15 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
Salama  Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 5:01 AM
Hi Funom, I'm so glad you liked this. I love to write about dancers! Thank you so much for stopping and reading this ...Samia
Salama  Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 5:38 PM
Hello vienna, Thank you very much for your very lovely comment! There are always two types of poems I always have a sequel to - dancers and werewolves! LOL By the way, your name is beautiful! :)
Salama  Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 3:28 PM
Hello Leo, Thank you so much for your beautiful comment! :)
Salama  Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 3:27 PM
Thank you very much Lisa!
Amadore Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 2:28 PM
You have woven a spell with words and rhythms that enthrall...
Cooper Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 2:18 PM
lovely!
Salama  Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 1:41 PM
Thank you so much Rockman. :) I just read 'The Salsa Dancer' and I loved it. I've yet to read "Dark Enchantress" but I am quite sure that I will love it as well. Thank you for your kind comment ...Samia
Pritts Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 1:34 PM
You've done it again. You never fail to please. It makes me think of a Gypsy celebration. I would like to counter with "The Salsa Dancer" and "Dark Enchantress" as this poem seems to be a combination of the two. You're really talented with your words and it's always a pleasure to read your writing. Thanks for sharing. Rockman :-)
Salama  Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 12:13 PM
Hi elliott, Thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked it ...Samia
The Drunken Poet Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 12:04 PM
This indeed was a awesome poem.Great write.I enjoyed this much .xoxoxo
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