Victor Buhagiar Poet Free verse

The Dance of Spring Breeze

A soft breeze blows light as a feather.
A promise that had us in thrall.
A zephyr that flowed all around,
A perfume that exalted our feelings.

It waltzed through the orchard.
Light seeds flowed on the sweet airflow.
Blossoms shone in the pale setting sun. 
And I feel exhilarated with joy.

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Bj Legros Kelley May 7, 2026 at 6:22 PM Beautiful poem, as usual my friend!

Andrea Dietrich March 30, 2026 at 11:05 AM I see this is on top 100 new poems list. Around 33 I think. Way to go. Such a nice poem for spring

Andrea Dietrich March 17, 2026 at 1:19 AM Exhilarating poem for spring!

Eve Roper March 11, 2026 at 10:47 PM Fresh air and sunshine always make one exhilarated especially in nature.

Mike Bayles March 11, 2026 at 2:36 PM Such a joyful poem.

CayCay Godwin March 9, 2026 at 11:17 AM I wanted to run with and through and follow every bit of imagery in this poem, Victor - wonderful and delightful writing.

sara Etgen-Baker March 6, 2026 at 10:23 PM delightful imagery and such upbeat words...truly uplifting.

Ink Empress March 5, 2026 at 5:55 AM Wow dear Victor! What a most stunning and gorgeous poem to come back with! Your wordplay and also how you’ve painted imagery throughout is just breathtaking and beautiful to the eyes and soul of the reader! Definitely a new fave for me! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always

Valsa George March 5, 2026 at 4:13 AM Your joy has filtered down into me through your sensuous details. Lovely poem, dear Victor.

Beryl Edmonds March 4, 2026 at 10:30 AM A lovely dance of spring breeze poem Victor. It’s lovely here, as Tom said, daffodils are dancing everywhere, it’s beautiful… Beryl

Evelyn Judy Buehler March 3, 2026 at 12:50 PM I immensely enjoyed this poem about an intoxicating spring breeze! It's a fave for me. :)

Paula Goldsmith March 3, 2026 at 11:35 AM "The Dance of Spring Breeze" is a lovely write. I enjoyed reading. Spring will be here soon. Have a great day writing away..........

Heidi Sands March 3, 2026 at 8:05 AM I love this and waltzed through the orchard. A Fave :)

Joseph May March 3, 2026 at 6:08 AM Spring fever is in the air

Kim Rodrigues March 3, 2026 at 5:39 AM A beauty! Love the light seeds flowing on the sweet airflow!

Daniel Henry Rodgers March 3, 2026 at 5:37 AM Hello Victor, such a breath of fresh air. I love the way you’ve personified the breeze the idea of it "waltzing through the orchard" gives the whole piece a wonderful sense of movement and grace. It’s a beautiful, uplifting tribute to the season. Thank you for sharing the joy! Blessings, Daniel

Sara Kendrick March 3, 2026 at 4:52 AM This one is a delightful dance of emotions with such descriptiveness that it was like being there. Thank you for sharing. Sara K

Tom Cunningham March 3, 2026 at 2:03 AM Spring has just arrived here, daffodils everywhere, it's most welcome despite all the gloom in our world right now. Tom

Ghairo Daniels March 3, 2026 at 1:54 AM Soo beautiful when Spring comes & everyone is tired of winter. “It waltzed through the orchard.” > excellent line to convey your meaning. Enjoy, Sweet Sir Poet.

Yann Rolland March 3, 2026 at 12:33 AM beautiful and touching poetry, nicely done

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh March 2, 2026 at 9:13 PM Beautiful.Like it.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 2, 2026 at 9:01 PM Mmmmmm, spring breeze… I long for thee. Such a delightful poem will have to suffice (whilst I suffer ice). Warm hugs dear vb! xomo