Get Your Premium Membership

The dance of dances

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Maria Fernandez-Garcia.


The Dance of...in 16 lines or less Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Miranda Hawley
As a dancer one day
I was in love to to be dancing.
As a dancer one day,
my feet couldn't stand on.
Rehearsing for hours for nothing, 
but bleeding, 
on a dance permormance
I couldn't be anymore.

The dance of dances
for me has reached the end. 
My dance shoes still feet me
but the steps don't feet 
my shoes to keep dancing on
the big stage to be dreaming.

Under the limelight 
I want to disappear
to be dancing all my life 
the dance of dances
I couldn't do in front.


Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/7/2024 3:53:00 PM
This is a great analogy to how we can feel as age slows us down. Great job
Login to Reply
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 6/8/2024 12:53:00 AM
Many thanks, Andrea. I really appreciate it. Blessings!
Date: 6/6/2024 1:04:00 AM
Let the dance go on. It is so delicate to read.
Login to Reply
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 6/6/2024 5:56:00 AM
Thanks a lot Victor. Blessings!
Date: 6/5/2024 1:05:00 PM
What a lovely/wonderful write/story. I can see if all before me. "Good Luck"  Have A Blessed Day Writing Away............
Login to Reply
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 6/5/2024 1:24:00 PM
Thank you very much dear Paula. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Have a blessed day you too!.
Date: 6/4/2024 4:57:00 PM
delicious poem, you are so talented, wish you the best maria
Login to Reply
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 6/5/2024 5:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Yann. I hope you are doing well. Blessings!

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry