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you stare ... wink, and walk over to me leaving your circle of admirers in disbelief sullied manner, (and skin), of a Magdaline prospect, differently indifferent (a vestal view of Heaven) faultless form, lulling the room with your sway smile dressed in coral bows, blossomed I say hello ... (hello back) then stumble like a boy over the shape of your words locution, sound, meaning - adrift lost to the roiling sweep of new portent and sensation pounding heart thrums my bones coursing fevered arteries … thoughts, a dervish of combustible ideas bewitched - transfixed and hungry and no focus but those bows - the dewy fruits that frame your lilt smile, dancing hypnotically curling, closing, pouting, pursing … toying with each other, (and with my core) o'er a glistening white chiclet expanse speaking to me more of temptation and taste than whatever words may be forming (or whatever sound may be tangled in the air between us) intonations I can NOT hear for sake of what has become my sole pursuit a crave, singular - my adventure, sublime ... your kiss. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "2019 Poetry Marathon Mile 12" Poetry Contest, Mark Toney, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 2/11/2019 10:26:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Gregory. Well penned.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/11/2019 11:06:00 PM
Thank you very much, Line!
Date: 1/26/2019 4:32:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Greg! SUPERB! Janice
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/27/2019 10:06:00 PM
I'm really pleased that you like this one, Janice - your opinion is one I value, and this was a labor of love ... not many poems develop that way, but this just flowed. Thank you for the kindness, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 1/26/2019 11:52:00 AM
Greg, congrats on yet another first-place win on mile 12 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest! This is exceptional! Awesome write, my friend. The captcha code on this comment is WAT. Lol... That's what I said when I saw you on top... WhAT??? By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/27/2019 10:04:00 PM
This made my day, Mark, when I saw it, thank you so much! (And another rough one at that, lol). This being a bit on the "racy" side I wasn't sure how it would fare, but I'm very proud of the poem itself - it was such a joy to write, and fun. Blessings and thanks again! :-)
Date: 3/2/2018 2:06:00 PM
"Blind-folded I could kiss a thousand mouths and know your lips, I can tell time by your mouths kisses" "Arthur Prysock...This is my Beloved"... your poem reminded me
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 7:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Frederic ... that has always been a favorite passage of mine, and I'm glad you appreciate my poem as well! Blessings, my good friend! :-)
Date: 3/2/2018 9:20:00 AM
Love this verse especially: The dewy fruits that frame your smile Dancing hypnotically Curling, closing, pouting, pursing Toying with each other ... (and with my core) A fun one!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 7:48:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim, I'm glad you enjoyed this little romp - it was fun to write! Blessings, my friend! :-) <3

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