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The Dance

Lost in the forest of surreal imagination I see you looking at my mind with something to hide you give me a smile with nothing to give I feel you so mine Our fingers are playing little games games of love our hands are holding the vine of desire they don't stop until our bodies become one The music of madness is alive everyone poisoning our worlds are shaking the same way we are surfing on the waves of our own rhythm Carlos Mongrut

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Date: 8/28/2012 10:24:00 PM
lovely write Carlos,,,thank you for sharing,,:) luv and hugs SK
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Seth C Mongrut
Date: 8/28/2012 10:26:00 PM
Thank you very much Sukmawati! :)
Date: 12/1/2009 3:57:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Carlos. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Seth C Mongrut
Date: 8/28/2012 10:26:00 PM
Thank you very much Carol! :)
Date: 11/29/2009 7:09:00 PM
Nice poem
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Seth C Mongrut
Date: 8/28/2012 10:26:00 PM
Thank you Edward! :)

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