The Dance

Lost in the forest of surreal imagination
I see you looking at my mind
with something to hide you give me a smile
with nothing to give I feel you so mine

Our fingers are playing little games
games of love
our hands are holding the vine of desire
they don't stop until our bodies become one

The music of madness is alive
everyone poisoning
our worlds are shaking
the same way we are surfing on the waves of our own rhythm

Carlos Mongrut
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Komala Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 10:24 PM
lovely write Carlos,,,thank you for sharing,,:) luv and hugs SK
Mongrut Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 10:26 PM
Thank you very much Sukmawati! :)
Brown Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 3:57 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Carlos. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Mongrut Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 10:26 PM
Thank you very much Carol! :)
Orozco Avatar
November 29, 2009 at 7:09 PM
Nice poem
Mongrut Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 10:26 PM
Thank you Edward! :)
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