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The Dance

We could have danced all night, around the calm pond where cold dark waves seem to send electric notes that echoed all around in the garden with melodies soft that sent throbs in our lonely hearts as we twirled and twirled, thinking of our love. From high above, luminous stars twinkled, on delicate, sensuous flowers, exuding faintly the sweet scent, urging us to speed our dance, to the tune of soft breeze, much to our delight as we cling more, two lips meet, it is Bliss. Placed 1
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Dietrich Avatar
June 11, 2025 at 3:57 PM
I see this is high on the new best poems list. Awesome
Spilchuk Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 8:07 AM
Enjoyed reading your stacked etheree.
Dietrich Avatar
April 21, 2025 at 3:57 PM
Wow what a well deserved win. Way to go, Victor
Goldsmith Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 11:11 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "The Dance" write. Great Ending... Happy Easter... Have a blessed day with your win.......
mysore Avatar
April 18, 2025 at 3:53 AM
Delicate words sets the tempo, beautiful write - stars urge you to dance! Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
George Avatar
April 18, 2025 at 12:07 AM
Dear Victor, back to your poem with Congratulations on your top win.
Empress Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 12:48 PM
Dear Victor, This is beautiful, and youv delivered it in such a descriptive manner, so creative and poetic and romantic, one that flows with such passionate emotions, and love, i love the way you've especially written "electric notes" "luminous stars twinkled, on delicate, sensuous flowers," how dreamy and ethereal! A soul stirring poem this is! Thank you for joining! Congratulations on your top win! Fave it is! Sending you light always
Buhagiar Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 12:50 PM
Thank you.
George Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 1:09 AM
Dear Victor, you are the 'young romantic' at your age! What fervent emotions of love and what a beautiful setting! Keep twirling and twirling until your heads go dizzy. Lovely poem.
Romios Avatar
April 14, 2025 at 3:53 PM
Wow, what a lovely, composed poem Victor! Nothing compares to true love, between two indicviduals, It is both intoxicating and spell binding. Even after we lose that one in death, that love has a life of its own.. Have to make this a FAV.! Phenomenal image choice. Bravo! Pangie Pangie
Kendrick Avatar
April 14, 2025 at 3:11 AM
Ahh!! Romantic lines penned, Victor. An enchanting lake. Sara K
Kitchin Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 2:37 PM
Victor, a wonderful etheree, very romantic.
Read Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 10:30 AM
Hi Victor I used to love to dance although I was terrible dancer lol.
Cunningham Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 5:27 AM
Very romantic verse Victor, I used to dance but slowing down a bit now lol. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
Williams Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 4:04 AM
Dearest Victor,what a beautifully romantic and lyrical poem I could feel the movement, the softness of the breeze, and the magic of that moonlit dance. The imagery is so vivid—from the rippling pond to the sweet-scented flowers—it truly feels like a moment suspended in time....Hugs
Buehler Avatar
April 12, 2025 at 8:43 PM
This is an enjoyable tale of happy abandon and romantic rapture, Victor. Lovely images!
Poet Avatar
April 12, 2025 at 2:07 PM
Victor, your fantastic poem about love and closeness in a romantic context. It depicts two lovers dancing by a peaceful pond, underlining their feelings and sensory bond. Issues include romance, nature, and the joyful feelings of strong emotional ties.
Andresen Avatar
April 12, 2025 at 12:15 PM
- Loved to dance in my youth... a lovely poem, Victor :) - Have a nice spring weekend :) - hugs
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