The Cycle

New ripening buds,
Flourishing and blossoming,
withering, then dead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/6/2014 7:03:00 PM
Hi Jen nice to meet you! You may do more than 1 haiku but they must be haiku - if you write 1 haiku, I will be very happy, above is not a haiku, so you take a bigger risk by doing more than 1 [though I will be glad to help you and check what you have written] here is a very good link which defines what "I believe is a haiku' http://www.graceguts.com/essays/haiku-checklist ... give it a look. Light & Love
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Jenny Brewer
Date: 5/12/2014 8:19:00 PM
Hi Debbie,nice to meet you too.Thank you for help with my Haiku attempt.please look at this definition http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku, the 5,7,5 count still stands as far as I understand it,If I were to change the capitals,I think it would be more of a Haiku also.??
Date: 8/10/2013 1:25:00 PM
Jenny love her haikus, I'll have to try one one of these days. Good job with "The Cycle", this one a mere 9 words! MC
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Date: 8/6/2013 5:46:00 AM
Great haiku true to count and form, great title, I love haikus and enjoyed this one, blessings sueellen
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Date: 8/5/2013 9:41:00 AM
Awesome! Hard-hitting last line! Let incipience shine through Death's scythe.
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Jenny Brewer
Date: 8/6/2013 12:03:00 AM
thank you,you are the first who likes my Haiku
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