The Cut

A country yearns industry
from assiduous minds revolutionary,
cities conceived with mind set and skill
yet lay insipid in the body of Britannia
those in need of life’s blood,
akin to human organs
served only; by arterial veins.

The first sod to lift an unfolding nation
the first cut the inauguration the call,
have a thought pleasure seeker
enduring men with pick, shovel, some did fall,
his sweat given freely or not as the case may be
to mingle with earth removed
or deep within copse ghyll may well be for a tree.

The Dales emptied, of its men
famine ravaged Ireland too,
drawn towards the rush of new born adrenaline
a creation of foresight
when the need for this an artery to flow
through lock, tunnel aqueduct,
transforming her virgin land
albeit out of trades of old,
an era steeped in tradition
tools an extension: of one’s own hand.

Adverse weather geography
this realm having found fame,
complexity from above, below,
the elements the environment
nothing to stand in obsessions way,
from soil to solid rock, energy sapping
clods of clay negotiated all
amidst many tongues, yet same laborious conclusion
wheeled away by the barrowman; 
horse and cart.

This precious land host to many heroes
those upon columns stand tall,
our sons live on in remembrance
a memorial for them all,
so to this symbolic structure
craved through hostile terrain,
a burly navvies sculptured cleft
within the very earth
his body one day to lay.

Oh the city Leeds, city Liverpool and those in between
the bargees upon the cut there now do dwell
living within the ideals of another time sown
but of ease it is with just a memory
conservation the historic debt on loan!

© Harry J Horsman  2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Devnath  Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 11:53 AM
I agree with my friend Shadow Hamilton. A great tribute indeed. Loved always, my friend, bl
Lamoureux Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 8:38 AM
This may be one of your best Harry. You should be very proud of this one. A poet could write for a lifetime and not write a poem of this quality. Straight to my favorites Harry.
Jacks Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 10:53 AM
Well done my friend! congratulations on your win
Hamilton Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 6:13 PM
a very powerful and patriotic write conveying the spirit that makes this land strong Shadow x smile hug
De Paz Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 3:21 AM
This is an inspired hymn to your homeland. Very strong indeed
A   Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 8:14 PM
nice win..PD
Dietrich Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 3:54 PM
I just read Mandy's version of this . SO NICE how you inspired her.
Jones Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 9:54 PM
One of my favorite ones from you Harry..really enjoyed tonight...and congratulations...
Kamoonpuri Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 10:52 PM
Congrats for yor high placing! Remarkable how u employ arteries n veins into a poem on social landscape views. I hope u read my latest too.
Onclaud Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 11:22 AM
socio-cutural concerns begging for answers.. very inquisitive commentary filled with thought-provoking premises... a formidable piece, harry..:) huggs
Docherty Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 6:23 AM
Wow, you crammed so much into this piece I don't think you can leave it without having taken something with you and it's most definitely thought provoking! Congratulations, and thakyou for sharing!
Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 1:38 AM
which contest was this in, I see a congrats. so CONGRATS!!!
Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 1:37 AM
You are a wise and knowledgeable writer, harry. And this one rings with the truth of what you know of this world. Great job.
Adams Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 10:20 PM
what a tremndous write this one is Harry...a history lesson taught in a very effective way...you have penned a masterpiece here and i see it has won in a contest...congrats for that!
Anglesey Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 7:27 PM
harry, this is a spellbinding piece of art. Amazing work. Going in my faves...Congrats on your win :)
Ryerson Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 9:32 AM
You keep topping yourself my friend...Absolutely marvelous tribute to your homeland and it's heroes...Ditto to Mandy and Deb's comment - Tim
Bantawa Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 7:58 AM
fine poem,congrats on your placement
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 4:19 AM
Told you it was good but it should have placed higher and as Deb says it should be printed ...it will be xx
Guzzi Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 7:43 PM
Harry this is GREAT, I really think you should find a local paper to print it! It's way too good to just sit here! http://www.forwardpoetry.co.uk/enter-competition.php Congrad's on your win Light & Love
Puddifoot Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 6:26 PM
this is a very well penned piece, harry, quite an epic, in fact, and looking at it again, maybe I should have placed it even higher - I really wrestled with the placements in this contest! congrats on your win :)
Carroll Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 2:39 PM
Hi Harry, An awesome write my friend.. Ken
Kapoor Avatar
November 14, 2013 at 6:10 AM
Impressive write with wonderful tribute to your great heroes, who brought the hopes and light on your land. Great tribute Harry and thank you for your kind words on my Mulberry Poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 1:12 PM
This is as I said on its first reading an amazing piece of work harry I am so proud you took up the challenge and what a write it is xx
Onclaud Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 11:44 AM
the stages of evolution steeped in deep analysis and reflection, harry... a brilliant one this is..:) huggs
Fraser Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 6:30 PM
This is a history lesson you have gifted us with Harry, a great epic of blood sweat and evolution,blessings Carl
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