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The Cut

A country yearns industry from assiduous minds revolutionary, cities conceived with mind set and skill yet lay insipid in the body of Britannia those in need of life’s blood, akin to human organs served only; by arterial veins. The first sod to lift an unfolding nation the first cut the inauguration the call, have a thought pleasure seeker enduring men with pick, shovel, some did fall, his sweat given freely or not as the case may be to mingle with earth removed or deep within copse ghyll may well be for a tree. The Dales emptied, of its men famine ravaged Ireland too, drawn towards the rush of new born adrenaline a creation of foresight when the need for this an artery to flow through lock, tunnel aqueduct, transforming her virgin land albeit out of trades of old, an era steeped in tradition tools an extension: of one’s own hand. Adverse weather geography this realm having found fame, complexity from above, below, the elements the environment nothing to stand in obsessions way, from soil to solid rock, energy sapping clods of clay negotiated all amidst many tongues, yet same laborious conclusion wheeled away by the barrowman; horse and cart. This precious land host to many heroes those upon columns stand tall, our sons live on in remembrance a memorial for them all, so to this symbolic structure craved through hostile terrain, a burly navvies sculptured cleft within the very earth his body one day to lay. Oh the city Leeds, city Liverpool and those in between the bargees upon the cut there now do dwell living within the ideals of another time sown but of ease it is with just a memory conservation the historic debt on loan! © Harry J Horsman 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/12/2014 11:53:00 AM
I agree with my friend Shadow Hamilton. A great tribute indeed. Loved always, my friend, bl
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Date: 12/28/2013 8:38:00 AM
This may be one of your best Harry. You should be very proud of this one. A poet could write for a lifetime and not write a poem of this quality. Straight to my favorites Harry.
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Date: 11/23/2013 10:53:00 AM
Well done my friend! congratulations on your win
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Date: 11/22/2013 6:13:00 PM
a very powerful and patriotic write conveying the spirit that makes this land strong Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/21/2013 3:21:00 AM
This is an inspired hymn to your homeland. Very strong indeed
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:14:00 PM
nice win..PD
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Date: 11/19/2013 3:54:00 PM
I just read Mandy's version of this . SO NICE how you inspired her.
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Date: 11/18/2013 9:54:00 PM
One of my favorite ones from you Harry..really enjoyed tonight...and congratulations...
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Date: 11/17/2013 10:52:00 PM
Congrats for yor high placing! Remarkable how u employ arteries n veins into a poem on social landscape views. I hope u read my latest too.
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Date: 11/17/2013 11:22:00 AM
socio-cutural concerns begging for answers.. very inquisitive commentary filled with thought-provoking premises... a formidable piece, harry..:) huggs
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Date: 11/17/2013 6:23:00 AM
Wow, you crammed so much into this piece I don't think you can leave it without having taken something with you and it's most definitely thought provoking! Congratulations, and thakyou for sharing!
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Date: 11/17/2013 1:38:00 AM
which contest was this in, I see a congrats. so CONGRATS!!!
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Date: 11/17/2013 1:37:00 AM
You are a wise and knowledgeable writer, harry. And this one rings with the truth of what you know of this world. Great job.
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Date: 11/16/2013 10:20:00 PM
what a tremndous write this one is Harry...a history lesson taught in a very effective way...you have penned a masterpiece here and i see it has won in a contest...congrats for that!
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Date: 11/16/2013 7:27:00 PM
harry, this is a spellbinding piece of art. Amazing work. Going in my faves...Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/16/2013 9:32:00 AM
You keep topping yourself my friend...Absolutely marvelous tribute to your homeland and it's heroes...Ditto to Mandy and Deb's comment - Tim
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Date: 11/16/2013 7:58:00 AM
fine poem,congrats on your placement
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Date: 11/16/2013 4:19:00 AM
Told you it was good but it should have placed higher and as Deb says it should be printed ...it will be xx
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Date: 11/15/2013 7:43:00 PM
Harry this is GREAT, I really think you should find a local paper to print it! It's way too good to just sit here! http://www.forwardpoetry.co.uk/enter-competition.php Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 11/15/2013 6:26:00 PM
this is a very well penned piece, harry, quite an epic, in fact, and looking at it again, maybe I should have placed it even higher - I really wrestled with the placements in this contest! congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/15/2013 2:39:00 PM
Hi Harry, An awesome write my friend.. Ken
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Date: 11/14/2013 6:10:00 AM
Impressive write with wonderful tribute to your great heroes, who brought the hopes and light on your land. Great tribute Harry and thank you for your kind words on my Mulberry Poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 11/13/2013 1:12:00 PM
This is as I said on its first reading an amazing piece of work harry I am so proud you took up the challenge and what a write it is xx
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Date: 11/13/2013 11:44:00 AM
the stages of evolution steeped in deep analysis and reflection, harry... a brilliant one this is..:) huggs
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Date: 11/12/2013 6:30:00 PM
This is a history lesson you have gifted us with Harry, a great epic of blood sweat and evolution,blessings Carl
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