The Curtain Call

Between the curtains
I stand, my hands together
Brown like a clay dove 

A messenger they
Hold my letter to you written 
In scratchy black ink

Trostsky. These flowers
Piled into a sleepy mound
Pink, yellow and peach 

These flowers are like
Our love, no longer alive
But no less lovely

I blossomed beneath
your steady blue gaze searching
for an answer to

For an answer to
lifes many big questions I
hope you've found answers 
 
This is our farewll
The velvet curtain closes
Love. Always. Frida.

* Haiku based on "Between the curtains", a painting by Frida Khalo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Agustin Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 7:16 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
Harper Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 11:11 PM
Zara, you caught the essence of stage and goodbye in this lovely poem, congratulations on your win
Lamoureux Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 8:24 PM
Lovely and haunting. Congrats.
A  Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 12:24 PM
Zara, , brilliant imagery... nice win * HUGS & LOVE <3 ~SKAT~
Horsman Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 11:34 AM
these are amazing Zara,, so visual....
Moore Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 1:36 PM
a good write zara , romantic tina x
Carroll Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 3:07 PM
Hi Zara, A well crafted romantic write..Good luck! Ken
A   Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 2:31 PM
Hi Zara, i like the imagery in your haiku. good luck in the contest based on this painting... xox..Linda
Andresen Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 12:16 PM
- You wrote this accomplished, Zara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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