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The Curtain Call

Between the curtains I stand, my hands together Brown like a clay dove A messenger they Hold my letter to you written In scratchy black ink Trostsky. These flowers Piled into a sleepy mound Pink, yellow and peach These flowers are like Our love, no longer alive But no less lovely I blossomed beneath your steady blue gaze searching for an answer to For an answer to lifes many big questions I hope you've found answers This is our farewll The velvet curtain closes Love. Always. Frida. * Haiku based on "Between the curtains", a painting by Frida Khalo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/7/2013 11:11:00 PM
Zara, you caught the essence of stage and goodbye in this lovely poem, congratulations on your win
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Date: 11/7/2013 8:24:00 PM
Lovely and haunting. Congrats.
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Date: 11/7/2013 12:24:00 PM
Zara, , brilliant imagery... nice win * HUGS & LOVE <3 ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/8/2013 11:34:00 AM
these are amazing Zara,, so visual....
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Date: 9/14/2013 1:36:00 PM
a good write zara , romantic tina x
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Date: 9/12/2013 3:07:00 PM
Hi Zara, A well crafted romantic write..Good luck! Ken
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Date: 9/12/2013 2:31:00 PM
Hi Zara, i like the imagery in your haiku. good luck in the contest based on this painting... xox..Linda
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Date: 9/12/2013 12:16:00 PM
- You wrote this accomplished, Zara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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