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Written on October 9, 2023

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Completely unrestrained, sun drenched and yummy, Tasting of the tropics, flavors so tender, Falling from the coconut tree to greet my tummy, Great amounts of fiber found in each bite…. Scrumptious like the mango, cashew and cherry And, just like these – they aren’t nuts at all, Instead, they’re a drupe, fleshy and a little harry, The coconut palm is the national tree of the Maldives. Coconut trees can bring 180 coconuts per yield, Such a delicacy should be mentioned as quite tasty, They bring so much sweetness to those who’ve peeled, Despite those who thought coconuts were afflicted with a curse. Though I didn’t realize the wonders of this flavor, Now I know what it means to use coconut oil - Feel the marvels of this amazingly beneficial savor, Enjoyable in so many ways I can’t even illustrate. Coconuts are more than just nuts that fall from the tree, They pour out wonders in oil, butter and beverages, Lasting long enough to prove that, to some degree, Their charms make hearts flutter with appreciation for the drupe!

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Date: 10/19/2023 4:05:00 AM
Love this write, Gina! Well done! Congratulations!
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Date: 10/18/2023 9:20:00 PM
Congratulations on a trophy win!!
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Date: 10/18/2023 12:26:00 PM
Nice history of the drupe Gina my friend. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 10/18/2023 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I really enjoyed reading your fun "Coconut"  write. I love coconuts to eat or to use.  Have a great day writing away....................
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Date: 10/10/2023 3:10:00 AM
This is a great poem Regina. I quite like coconuts and love the smell when in products. They are very good for you. Love the lines, ‘ Tasting of the tropics’ ‘ They pour out wonders’. It is a very informative piece and well researched. If this is for the contest then the very best of luck. Hugs and smiles to you :):)
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Date: 10/9/2023 9:09:00 PM
You have captured the essence of the coconut. Indeed, more than just a nut.
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Date: 10/9/2023 6:27:00 PM
Very informative. with all the palm trees I wonder why there arn't any coco nut trees.
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Date: 10/9/2023 7:38:00 AM
The coconut comes alive with your beautiful descriptions, and I learned something new. This tasty poem is perfect for the contest.
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Date: 10/9/2023 7:34:00 AM
- Everything that reminds me of coconuts is my shower shampoo... it smells wonderful :))) - A lovely poem, Gina :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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