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The Cryin Clown

There's a well traveled "Broken Heart Lane" On the outskirts of my hometown People come from miles around Sharing misery from love in vain A honkytonk where sad songs flow Underneath a flashing neon sign Where libations and music combine To be a pied piper for lonely souls From the first time I walked in Found an empty booth at the back My love train had jumped the track Those sad songs were not my friends I'd sit by that whiskey river That ran from the sea of love They'd always give me a shove When their message was delivered It was called "The Cryin Clown Performances were always live You could slow dance with brokenhearted wives Until the river pulled you down One day I finally moved away Broke loose from my pillory That old clown would call to me Every time those sad songs played I may be love's circus clown I know where I won't be found In a river where whiskey drowns Neath the sign of the Cryin Clown an original poem by the "Poemdog" Daniel Turner Pillory - wooden framework with holes for the head and hands where the offender was exposed to public abuse

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/4/2016 3:26:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading this - so many beautiful lines!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/4/2016 4:36:00 PM
Thank you, Fiona. I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave friendly comments. Peace my friend:)
Date: 4/3/2016 1:00:00 PM
Daniel, this is FANTASTIC writing. One of your best. SEVEN
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/3/2016 4:38:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I really appreciate your kind comments. Peace my friend:)
Date: 3/31/2016 10:17:00 AM
Slow dance with this brokenhearted wife? We have a joint in our town like that too. It's called Grab a Granny!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/3/2016 4:34:00 PM
Sounds like my kinda place. Thanks for stopping by, Jean. Peace my friend:)
Date: 3/30/2016 10:32:00 PM
fabulous tune my friend...many have gone down that path but not many return
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/31/2016 7:36:00 AM
Thank you, Tim. Yeah, it's like a home for broken hearts or something. I appreciate the friendly visit. Peace my friend:)
Date: 3/30/2016 8:48:00 PM
This brought to mind my first encounter with poetry, as a very young man, and loving the lyrics to Willie Nelson's "Whiskey River"...way ahead of his time with his poetic lyrics and "jazz phrasing"..."drowning in the amber currents of the wetness of it's soul". Nice write for a windy, stormy spring night. J.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/30/2016 8:57:00 PM
I love Willie Nelson! I'm glad you liked my little song. Needs some spicing up, I think. Peace my friend:)
Date: 3/30/2016 8:10:00 PM
A real tear jerker DT. Sounds like a joint in Ft. Smith, AR. I've been to, we called the "menopause room". Good write. Brought back some old memories ...
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/30/2016 8:36:00 PM
Not from there, but lived there a couple of years. I live in Dallas, trust me, there's a few of those joints here too.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/30/2016 8:32:00 PM
Well Charlie I'm from Arkansas too! Just across the state. I appreciate the friendly visits. Have a shot on me. Peace my friend:)

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