Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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The Crush

Hi Dave

Hope you remember me from the dance the other day,
that was truly neat of you to walk me home, 
dancing with you was nice, liked the music you asked to play.
I never saw you before, but now in the halls you roam,
and you are in some of my classes, I hope you like me,
cause I really like you lots. I dream of you at night. 
And of our kiss, so romantic to kiss under that tree,
Dave, I am sort of shy but I just had to write.

I think we have stuff in common and I know your are a bit older, 
and I am just turned sixteen but I am not a kid, okay!
Dave, I just cannot forget my head laying on your shoulder, 
what do you think about that? The feeling never goes away. 
It was sweet how you gave me your black leather coat, 
to wear on the walk home.  In class I am writing this letter!
I left it on your desk, maybe write back a short note,
oh, yeah, I will soon get rid of my braces and will look better.

Dave I was wondering if you want to go for a real date like why, 
not?  What do you think?  Say YES and that will be so great.
Oh, Dave, please don't break my heart and make me cry . . .  
I think meeting was our ultimate destiny and our true fate!  

Love XOXXOXO

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January 10, 2019


Poetry/Rhyme/The Crush
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1102-715-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, School Time Crush
sponsor, Faraz Ajmal

Fifth Place

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Eve Roper March 9, 2019 at 5:21 PM Congratulations on your win, Dear Heart . Eve ~`* Constance La France March 10, 2019 at 11:21 AM Eve, thanks for visiting with congratulations !

Faraz Ajmal March 9, 2019 at 1:07 PM I absolutely love reading this poem of yours,especially the last stanza, for it is full of innocence, " please don't break my heart", this implies how much you like that person, anyways many congratulations on your wonderful win in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day Constance La France March 10, 2019 at 11:21 AM Faraz, thanks so much for the inspiration of your contest and my fine placement, looking forward to your next challenge ~

Jamal Abboud January 11, 2019 at 9:01 AM enjoyed reading this innocent letter. Constance La France January 11, 2019 at 11:40 AM Thanks Jamal, oh sweet teen love, so innocent, when the matters of life are nothing compared to a crush at school !

Vijay Pandit January 10, 2019 at 5:02 PM This is so sweet and charming..and so real! I enjoyed reading the letter..you gave her a voice ..and meaning to her feelings. Best for a win at the TOP, Dear Heart. Constance La France January 11, 2019 at 11:39 AM Vijay, thanks for visiting my poem and for the great comment, it was hard to put myself back to a sixteen year old girl with a crush, but I did have one on this guy named Dave back then, so I just went there in my head, lol ~