The Crumbling of Ebonies Tower

Unable to somehow escape this castle of want

As an apparition endlessly roaming its corridores

From room to room and door to door; up and down its spiral staircase

Looking at the paintings upon the walls, of another era, gone by....

Desperately seeking something inside, of these bolted moments

Trapped within its confines of self imposed?

Fairytales of created desires; born upon the pages

Of the now, once upon a time....

Sitting in front of the Venetian vanities looking glass mirror

Lights aglow and brush in hand

As voices resound all about, within hushed tones

Whispering a myriad of marmoreal; which haunts her past

Eyes penetrating beyond these reflections; caught behind their closing gates

As a hand reaches out amid the darkness

Her once again trance, broken, by its gentle touch....

Rising from her Victorian armchair, to embrace, his offering of love

The prince of longings arrival ~

Adorned in the jewels of promises long ago written

Across the predestined of the parchments, blood red heart

Two souls colliding....

Crossing these barriers; to the always, of meant to be

Holding the magical key, to these chains that had bound her

Within the chambers of the castles walls; which only he, could ever unlock!

Beyond the balcony of never never lands, forbidden forest

Apparitions of dreams once dreamn't; sealed, forever, between the paragraphs....

As upon a white steed they ride, unto the sunrise, of happilies ever after ~

Into the awakened hand of fates, land of the enchanteds, "Love," forevermore!

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The crumbling of ebonies tower....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/13/2009 5:44:00 PM
i received your soup.m,it seems it works ok from the receiving side,i was gonna delete the comment so i wont fill your comments space with my bla bla,but i leave it there--you re a good honest friend and i always pray for you so tha God will heal your pain of you recent lost loved one,i pray for others too,and please do pray for me-so thanks John--love charma;)
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Date: 6/13/2009 5:06:00 PM
i received your soup mail my dear,i did....i ve sent you a blank one so we give it another try,maybe it works ok:)--love charma
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Date: 5/1/2009 3:39:00 AM
Truly wonderfully written verse that lets you see beyond a veil, part to your imagination part to something more..It reads to me as a plea for peace,for one who finds it so hard to take down barriers built around her,to let them crumble and be part of her dreams,free again to live and love.Feels to me to be some sort of intrusion into the personal,something you've released within maybe?Deeper muse each time you read.Sure your thoughts are known,however that be..Kindest thoughts,Anna-Marie.
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Date: 4/29/2009 8:02:00 PM
You had me all tangled up in this glorious piece of poetry! Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 3/26/2009 9:14:00 AM
John, she cannot read this, without finding in you a sensitive soul of care and warmth. The imageries keep one grasping after them like a child after a butterfly ... they litterally fly. Great talent, superb genius, thanks for all your inspirations. God bless you
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Date: 3/16/2009 7:28:00 AM
So Brownian-like and powerful. Deep crafting, man. Love
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Date: 3/14/2009 5:44:00 PM
Brilliant John! Rather intriguing,capti-vative writing...friend. Your methodology and perverse subtle way of drawing the reader into a place one could relate and fantasize about is a unique and frothy talent! Friend & poet, you are so amazing at writing! Thanks for your patience and loyalty!Thanks for commenting on my.. "Out of this world" piece. Just found time to get back writing again and trying to catch up with everyone! You are a true poet...thanks for being so thrilling!~ Janey
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Date: 3/14/2009 10:24:00 AM
My oh my. Such eloquence. You outdid your self with this one, john. Thanks for your poetry and your always kind comments. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/13/2009 6:49:00 PM
Absolutley charming my dear friend! I espiecially love how the ending wraps togeather!; "Into the awakened hand of fates, land of the enchanteds, "Love," forevermore!"' Absolutely beautiful John! Please do write more! I just get lost in your poems :) Thanks for your lovely comments :) It means the world to me! Goodnight my friend. Much love, ~Catherine:)
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Date: 3/13/2009 6:44:00 PM
Excellent imagery, beautifully written, I think I was on the edge of my seat as I was reading each line...this is wonderful John
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Date: 3/13/2009 5:19:00 PM
John John My friend wow what a great imagination you have. Such a magical write with depths and peaks ,so heartfelt. I am think you must be one of the most romantic men along with Michael D. on this site. Hearts flutter at your feet winds breeze through the pages you write! Wonderfully done!!! Love Laura :)
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Date: 3/13/2009 2:37:00 PM
Check your Soup Mail, John.
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Date: 3/13/2009 8:12:00 AM
John, enchanting poem filled with thought-provoking images! And I'm glad the tower crumbles, for she deserves to be free. I'm sure your special friend loved this dedication. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/13/2009 5:26:00 AM
Greetings John! How "The crumbling of ebonies tower" might shake the ground. I'm sure that this 'special friend' will be overwhelminly happy with this thoughtful and beautiful write! The imagery is tender and sweet, but still it seems to be penned by a strong and steady hand. Best to you and yours! Love to you...Mikki
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Date: 3/13/2009 4:22:00 AM
awww a beautiful write John and hope you are well my precious precious friend, you are in our thoughts and in our heart love diane God bless you John.
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Date: 3/12/2009 10:16:00 AM
This is truly beautiful, and cutting....like, right to the heart. Thanks for your comments, your sweet words, and the loveliness of your soul. They are truly a breath of fresh air, a passionate voice... I often find myself at a loss of what to respond to your kind words, because it truly overwhelms me, and I am not used to that....but your sincerity touches me so deeply.:) Don't change! Don't let life destroy that pureness about you. Love, Sara:)
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Date: 3/11/2009 3:53:00 PM
This is lovely, John. Friendship is a gift from God, at least that is what I think. I hope that the happy is always with her! It is so nice to here from you! i have been ok just a little blue, I guess. The sunshine will help. Hurray for Spring! :) (Proverbs 18:24) God bless you always, John, and thank you for your lovely comments! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/11/2009 1:57:00 AM
what a gorgeous dedication to someone special, who sounds like a very sweet, but sad soul. beautiful John, love, Kristin
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Date: 3/11/2009 12:48:00 AM
'Fairytales ... born upon the pages' and 'Whispering a myriad of marmoreal' wow so many wonderful lines in there... you have described your immense respect and love for this woman so well with your words... in between the towers!! i loved the passion in this write... :)! have a nice day JOhn! its going into my favs!! ~ Arany
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Date: 3/10/2009 9:22:00 PM
John you know I have always believed very strongly that our friends play a major role in defining the person that we are - You have displayed a enormous amount of care and consideration for someone who's friendship you obviously hold in high regard - Beautiful Poem Brother - YF4L, God Bless, MJ
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Date: 3/10/2009 7:22:00 PM
I too thought as Chris but whatever it is it is so beautiful and almost fairy tale,,~perfect~
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Date: 3/10/2009 5:13:00 PM
Love can reach places of once upon a time to capture the moments of now....I love this as it reveals the writer's passionate heart....
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Date: 3/10/2009 4:31:00 PM
This is some write John....I read this piece and I am blown away by the love in the poem..you really dug deep and wrote a marvelous poem..everything about this speaks love....lucky woman.
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