The Cruise

There once was a fancy boat,
And not anymore did it float.
But it once was a cruise,
With real big crews,
And it once was a fancy boat.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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May 23, 2019 at 6:04 AM
I like how you take all of the pomp and circumstance out of the cruise ship in this one. Nice!
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