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The Cruel Sea

Pounding seas, wind tossed spray Cold North wind, blowing night and day The ice gripping men in disarray The convoy ploughing onward The merchant vessels, shadows in mist, Weave and wind, wend and twist Then disappear when torpedo kissed The convoy ploughing onward The small corvette, the guiding hand The leader of the straggling band But cannot make a fighting stand The convoy ploughing onward The men washed into icy seas The eyes that bulge, the limbs that freeze The ship brought down upon its knees The convoy ploughing onward The submarine torpedoes roar Explosion, seas rush through open door Ships and men on the ocean floor The convoy ploughing onward Few are left when journey's done Supplies got through, the race is run So many lost, so who has won? The convoy ploughing onward

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Date: 1/26/2016 11:06:00 PM
TOM, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT **
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Date: 11/6/2009 5:23:00 PM
Lovely poem Tom. I enjoyed reading it. Pam
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Date: 11/5/2009 3:50:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Tom. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/4/2009 4:50:00 PM
Awesome description of a war at sea, Tom. I could feel the cold seas rushing through the "open door." When so many are lost in war, the question always begs, "Who has won?" What a powerful, brilliant write in form, rhyme, meter and content! Love, Carolyn
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