The Crow's Nest

When I heard the crow squawk
I knew it’s in a tree
But then I looked down
And it looked up at me
For I was on the branch
Right above its head
Where a crow should be
But it was me instead

It didn’t look happy
With a threatening face
Yet I was the sadder
On a tree out of place
And then noticed my feet
Clutched a branch on that tree
Sixty feet above what
Was more normal for me

I then saw my fingers
Had not one fingernail
Instead were wing-like
To deliver airmail
So I yelled at the crow
For being such a pest
Then ruffled my feathers
To perch inside a nest

But there wasn’t much room
For me and tail feathers
And since high up a tree
I feared for bad weather
Yet no matter my thoughts
We began to capsize
Due to me high in it
And outlandishly sized

We went sagging, sagging
Which was rather a feat
For such a massive tree
Yet I held with bird feet
Not real feet, but talons
I must learn true bird speak
But I hadn’t the time
As the ground touched my beak

What a predicament
As far as a plight goes
So I flapped and took off
Which then sent all the crows
Higher into the air
Then where I was before
Then with human eyes I
Looked up from the ground floor

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Date: 1/2/2025 10:51:00 PM
Hey, dude! Send me your brain! You make me laugh so hard, My tears fall like welcome fresh rain? I thought of a line from an old song. Reminds me ofyou. “ He ain’t heavy, he’s my brother!))))) Hugs, Pangie)))))))))
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Date: 12/29/2024 8:28:00 PM
What an imagination you have, David! ~ Kay Rowe
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Date: 12/29/2024 7:14:00 AM
- Creative with humor, great written David :) - Happy New Year :) - hugs
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Date: 12/29/2024 12:25:00 AM
Oh, a sad ending. I was hoping you would nail it. The whimsy of flying gave me a smile.
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Date: 12/27/2024 10:03:00 PM
It never ceases to amaze me where our minds can take us, exotic places or soar like a bird. Hope you have a happy and healthy New year David. Tom
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David Fisher
Date: 12/29/2024 7:20:00 AM
Thanks Tom, and Happy New Year! Yes, there's a mini-vacation every time we visit our imagination.
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