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The Crowning Glory

He keeps himself confined, to bluster now, and remonstrate the struggle being more than he can bear. Pieces of him pulverized, fashioned from the sweat of his own making to a glimpse of the immortal, just a glimpse, but not the crowning glory. So many vestiges, heros in the making, but a careless chip, an errant slice, consigns them to the beggars pile, without that patina of agelessness. Never ready, never groomed to wear that sacred halo on his head, the crowning glory. Once in a while a piece emerges, bursting from the cold, defiant marble, his fingers work, so resolute, to fabricate this work of art, fingers, limbs and face in perfect symmetry, they become eternal,his reward a wreath, the crowning glory! Author's Note ...inspired by the poetry of Seamus Heaney.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/21/2016 11:21:00 AM
Thank you for your most insightful review... I love Henaey's poetry, it's very 'earthy!' Best wishes, Keith
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 3/21/2016 11:57:00 AM
You are always welcome here... Keith
Date: 3/20/2016 2:51:00 PM
I really enjoyed this poem of yours, Keith. I read it through twice...In fact I am going to give it another read right now! My very best regards, Keith...And my warmest wishes. :) john
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 3/20/2016 4:02:00 PM
You are very kind my friend... thanks for your delightful commentary. Best wishes, Keith

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