Samuel Otieng Poet Free verse

The Crown Fits

The thin spiked yellow jeweled crown,
Fits tooth to grove on her head,
A marvel of opulent beauty,
Smokes out a seigneurial aura.  

The garland blossoms on her head,
Sneezing a charm of yellows and reds,
A scenic ooze of mesmeric fragrance,
Matched by her ardent smile.

She wears the crown of my heart,
Rules the throne of my love,
With an unmarked affable affection,
For she has much love to give.

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Beata Agustin October 28, 2024 at 8:45 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Richard Lamoureux June 18, 2020 at 9:26 AM A cornucopia of imagery. I enjoyed your winning piece.

Grahame Mahrer April 29, 2019 at 9:17 AM Just read your poem. Congratulations on your win you truly deserved it with these passionate words. Samuel Otieng June 13, 2019 at 12:46 AM Thank you so much Grahame.

Gershon Wolf April 23, 2019 at 1:43 PM What unique imagery. Bravo, poet! :) gw Samuel Otieng April 23, 2019 at 1:46 PM Thank you Gershon.

Sandra Haight April 22, 2019 at 4:54 PM Such a lovely tribute to your love, Samuel, so wonderfully expressed. Congratulations on your podium win! Sandra Samuel Otieng April 23, 2019 at 4:32 AM Hey Sandra. Much appreciated visit and comment.

M. L. Kiser April 22, 2019 at 3:10 PM A lovely passionate peace. Congrat's on your win. Samuel Otieng April 23, 2019 at 4:31 AM Thank you for the visit Kiser.

Line Gauthier April 21, 2019 at 11:51 PM Congrats on your silver medal finish, Samuel, with this lovely winning poem. Samuel Otieng April 23, 2019 at 4:15 AM Thanks for the visit Line.

John Gondolf April 17, 2019 at 4:58 AM A beautiful tribute to the one you love, Samuel, congrats on your win. John Samuel Otieng April 20, 2019 at 3:05 PM Thank you John.