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The Crown Fits

The thin spiked yellow jeweled crown, Fits tooth to grove on her head, A marvel of opulent beauty, Smokes out a seigneurial aura. The garland blossoms on her head, Sneezing a charm of yellows and reds, A scenic ooze of mesmeric fragrance, Matched by her ardent smile. She wears the crown of my heart, Rules the throne of my love, With an unmarked affable affection, For she has much love to give.

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Date: 10/28/2024 8:45:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 6/18/2020 9:26:00 AM
A cornucopia of imagery. I enjoyed your winning piece.
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Date: 4/29/2019 9:17:00 AM
Just read your poem. Congratulations on your win you truly deserved it with these passionate words.
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Samuel Otieng
Date: 6/13/2019 12:46:00 AM
Thank you so much Grahame.
Date: 4/23/2019 1:43:00 PM
What unique imagery. Bravo, poet! :) gw
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Samuel Otieng
Date: 4/23/2019 1:46:00 PM
Thank you Gershon.
Date: 4/22/2019 4:54:00 PM
Such a lovely tribute to your love, Samuel, so wonderfully expressed. Congratulations on your podium win! Sandra
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Samuel Otieng
Date: 4/23/2019 4:32:00 AM
Hey Sandra. Much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 4/22/2019 3:10:00 PM
A lovely passionate peace. Congrat's on your win.
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Samuel Otieng
Date: 4/23/2019 4:31:00 AM
Thank you for the visit Kiser.
Date: 4/21/2019 11:51:00 PM
Congrats on your silver medal finish, Samuel, with this lovely winning poem.
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Samuel Otieng
Date: 4/23/2019 4:15:00 AM
Thanks for the visit Line.
Date: 4/17/2019 4:58:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to the one you love, Samuel, congrats on your win. John
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Samuel Otieng
Date: 4/20/2019 3:05:00 PM
Thank you John.

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