The crowd roared

.

                         az 
             'round the guardz
                       mine
                     cheated
               circling their spy
                 unto her side

                  i whispered
                  "i love you"
             she pulled the mic
                       close
                she whispered 
                "oh so cliche"

            hern pretty winked
               and continued
                "hey edvard
               i love you too"
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Maverick Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 10:05 PM
Love is part of exulistence for sure James In its many parts, in fits and starts,'
Peranteau Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 11:21 AM
love's grandeur....so keeps mine pen in glisser mode sir ;)
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