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The Crosses In Your Eyes

You smile at me, telling me "everything is ok....." You have your shades on, even when there's no sun to burn your eyes. I know you are a strong woman in the outside, who is afraid of illuminating her hurts deep within. You know if I look deep into your eyes, I'll see the burden you carry; I'll see the crosses in your eyes.....

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Date: 7/29/2015 12:28:00 AM
Back to congratulate you, Ted! Kim :-)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/29/2015 10:00:00 AM
Thank you Kim! ;-) I really appreciate it! *^_^* <3
Date: 7/20/2015 8:47:00 AM
Love the economy of words whilst magnifying the tension in the moment. Love this style and your take of the theme, Teddy. Goodluck in the contest!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/20/2015 10:49:00 AM
Thank you so much for passing by and wishing me well Kim! *^_^*
Date: 7/18/2015 5:41:00 PM
Very great write. All the best
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/20/2015 10:48:00 AM
Thank you so much Njeri! *^_^*
Date: 7/18/2015 2:27:00 AM
Hi, Teddy, Good luck in the contest with your poem. Strong feelings and your caring, I felt here. ~~Blessings, Darlene
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/18/2015 7:33:00 AM
Thank you for passing by and commenting on my work Darlene! :-)
Date: 7/17/2015 2:31:00 PM
Our eyes say so much and shades simply mask our feelings - an emotional write Teddy good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/18/2015 7:32:00 AM
Thank you for your well wishes buddy! ;-)

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