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The Cross Made of Metal and Brass

And yes! It’s still around him, tied on to his neck. Its shimmer and shine, without any fade. The Only sign that’s left among us. The silvery dazzle dazzled me up each day I look onto it, that still I count to him. Gone are those days and erased are those memories between us. He cleared it; and now, I`m left only with this chain. So grateful I am, that I gifted him the chain, the chain brought with Lots of happiness and hopes. Kneaded with the beads of joy and string of long lasting love. The same chain now assures me one thing; that He do remember me. Words are unsaid among us and Great silence overshadowed us, Left out with only the spark lings, to which I`m pretending to be counted. The day he removes the chain, the day he will kill me. Everything will be ended; without even saying a “Good bye” My chain will disappear into nowhere, where it will never count to anyone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/27/2016 3:37:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Pooja.:)
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Date: 9/20/2016 1:42:00 PM
Pooja, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/19/2016 9:34:00 PM
POOJA, Georgie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/18/2016 1:26:00 PM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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Date: 9/18/2016 12:32:00 PM
this is my first poem suggestions and opinions are invited
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