Kash Poet Poet Haiku

The Cross Dazzles

afternoon rainbow---
almost touching its arch
the church's cross

stealing sundrops---
some migratory birds
on the rainbow's trail

setting sun--
in its last ray
the cross dazzles

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Anne Rutherford January 14, 2014 at 2:43 PM Looking back to some of your older poems . This one is a picture you can see as you read it, Love it!! Anne

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders July 21, 2012 at 8:54 AM Just beautiful Kash! your haiku is always a pleasure to read. Congrats on your wonderful win! :)) Have a wonderful weekend. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Sara Kendrick July 20, 2012 at 2:57 PM ((()))Congrats on your winning work..Enjoyed reading again..Sara

Terry O'Leary July 20, 2012 at 2:10 PM Beautiful set... Congrats... Terry

Andrea Dietrich July 20, 2012 at 11:56 AM this was one of the best,kash. congrats on the winners' list.

Joseph May July 19, 2012 at 1:02 PM congrats on your win Kash

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 19, 2012 at 12:39 PM congrats Kash on a superb win for this truly amazing poem .. beauty painted in words on your canvas scene to share with luv..

Barbara Gorelick July 19, 2012 at 11:45 AM Good work Kash..I love reading your pieces. congrats. BG

Kim Merryman July 18, 2012 at 6:44 PM I knew this one had to be on the winner's list. Congrats on your win, Kash! Love, Kim

Deborah Burch July 18, 2012 at 2:47 PM Big Congrats on your win Kash!!! Such wonderful Ku's!!! And such juxtaposition with "church's cross...stealing sundrops..." truely poetic and deeply thought provoking...love ya, deb

Joyce Johnson July 18, 2012 at 1:00 PM Lovely haikus. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

David Williams July 18, 2012 at 10:59 AM Kash, congrats on your win, 'stealing sundrops' just genius!, well done...David

Nette Onclaud July 18, 2012 at 9:33 AM ohh, congrats, kashi... you are afloat these days!..:) huggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown July 18, 2012 at 9:32 AM Congratulations on your wonderful poetry placing in Gail's "Scenery"contest Kash. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud July 18, 2012 at 9:16 AM kashi, where have you been?... a fine day to you!..:) huggs!

Elizabeth Wesley July 18, 2012 at 8:59 AM Beautiful Kash, haiku at is best with such lovely imagery! Luv, Lizzie

Andrea Dietrich July 17, 2012 at 9:39 PM Hi, Kash, just stopping by as I try catching up here. Hope you are having a GREAT day.

Painted Hunter July 17, 2012 at 12:31 PM This is top-notch stuff here. It is everything haiku should be!

Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2012 at 9:31 PM WOW, this is an amazing series of haiku, Kash. I am wondering, is it for the paint a picture contest? Or even , is it for the sunset contest? It would seem to work in either one!! that last one is a dazzler.

Joann Grisetti July 16, 2012 at 7:25 PM Terrific series of haiku. I really like the middle one. Those naughty birds.

Sara Kendrick July 16, 2012 at 1:42 PM Very descriptive work..If for a contest, should be in the top ones.Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

Nette Onclaud July 16, 2012 at 10:11 AM rrring, helllo kashi bud.. are you there??.. bring me new inspiration!..:) huggs!

Russell Sivey July 15, 2012 at 11:24 AM I just love your glorious descriptions in this awesome write of yours Kash! You have done spectacular with this one my friend! Great Work!!

Wilma Neels July 15, 2012 at 10:48 AM Lovely imagery Kash, this one made me smile ;) hope your weekend's been a good one!

James Marshall Goff July 15, 2012 at 8:41 AM Cool...in the moment...haiki! Kash! Jmg

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