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The Cross Dazzles

afternoon rainbow--- almost touching its arch the church's cross stealing sundrops--- some migratory birds on the rainbow's trail setting sun-- in its last ray the cross dazzles

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/14/2014 2:43:00 PM
Looking back to some of your older poems . This one is a picture you can see as you read it, Love it!! Anne
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Date: 7/21/2012 8:54:00 AM
Just beautiful Kash! your haiku is always a pleasure to read. Congrats on your wonderful win! :)) Have a wonderful weekend. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/20/2012 2:57:00 PM
((()))Congrats on your winning work..Enjoyed reading again..Sara
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Date: 7/20/2012 2:10:00 PM
Beautiful set... Congrats... Terry
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Date: 7/20/2012 11:56:00 AM
this was one of the best,kash. congrats on the winners' list.
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Date: 7/19/2012 1:02:00 PM
congrats on your win Kash
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Date: 7/19/2012 12:39:00 PM
congrats Kash on a superb win for this truly amazing poem .. beauty painted in words on your canvas scene to share with luv..
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Date: 7/19/2012 11:45:00 AM
Good work Kash..I love reading your pieces. congrats. BG
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Date: 7/18/2012 6:44:00 PM
I knew this one had to be on the winner's list. Congrats on your win, Kash! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/18/2012 2:47:00 PM
Big Congrats on your win Kash!!! Such wonderful Ku's!!! And such juxtaposition with "church's cross...stealing sundrops..." truely poetic and deeply thought provoking...love ya, deb
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Date: 7/18/2012 1:00:00 PM
Lovely haikus. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/18/2012 10:59:00 AM
Kash, congrats on your win, 'stealing sundrops' just genius!, well done...David
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Date: 7/18/2012 9:33:00 AM
ohh, congrats, kashi... you are afloat these days!..:) huggs!
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Date: 7/18/2012 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry placing in Gail's "Scenery"contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2012 9:16:00 AM
kashi, where have you been?... a fine day to you!..:) huggs!
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Date: 7/18/2012 8:59:00 AM
Beautiful Kash, haiku at is best with such lovely imagery! Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 7/17/2012 9:39:00 PM
Hi, Kash, just stopping by as I try catching up here. Hope you are having a GREAT day.
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Date: 7/17/2012 12:31:00 PM
This is top-notch stuff here. It is everything haiku should be!
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Date: 7/16/2012 9:31:00 PM
WOW, this is an amazing series of haiku, Kash. I am wondering, is it for the paint a picture contest? Or even , is it for the sunset contest? It would seem to work in either one!! that last one is a dazzler.
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Date: 7/16/2012 7:25:00 PM
Terrific series of haiku. I really like the middle one. Those naughty birds.
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Date: 7/16/2012 1:42:00 PM
Very descriptive work..If for a contest, should be in the top ones.Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
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Date: 7/16/2012 10:11:00 AM
rrring, helllo kashi bud.. are you there??.. bring me new inspiration!..:) huggs!
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Date: 7/15/2012 11:24:00 AM
I just love your glorious descriptions in this awesome write of yours Kash! You have done spectacular with this one my friend! Great Work!!
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Date: 7/15/2012 10:48:00 AM
Lovely imagery Kash, this one made me smile ;) hope your weekend's been a good one!
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Date: 7/15/2012 8:41:00 AM
Cool...in the moment...haiki! Kash! Jmg
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