The Critic

I’m leader of a Bluegrass Band A tough critic watches each show She’s always out there listening Hears goofs that others never know No reviews in the Newspaper But after the show, when I’m home My wife always gives her review Caught it all, like a fine tooth comb She’s heard all of the songs practiced And knows how they sound when they’re right She’s heard the harmony singing Can tell when the harmony’s tight But as M C, I do ad Lib My Critic never has a clue The few jokes I tell on the stage She’s never heard, they’re always new
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Williams Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 6:27 AM
Charles congrats on your win..David
Brown Avatar
July 10, 2012 at 12:35 PM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's " Big Brother " contest Charles. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 8:03 PM
This is really great. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 2:44 PM
congratulations on your well-deserved win! Lori
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 2:43 PM
congratulations on your well-deserved win! Lori
Sweetheart Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 1:23 PM
congrats Charles on a wonderful write and win for big brother theme luv..
Merryman Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 9:42 AM
An interesting take on the contest. Good work. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Bauer Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 2:29 PM
i like this and i hope your critic enjoys your jokes!
O'Leary Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 2:39 AM
Wonderful to have a critic like that! Nice poem! Terry
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