The Criteria

As I grow like an unsure plant
I hope to become a giant Oak tree
It seems I do not control the moment
Some have been tramped by heavy forces

My friends have suddenly become tall
As I seek to reach them 
They failed to look and to pull up
Some fall down dirtily and fall forever

In education the best I thought would succeed
In education the worst I knew would fail
But the successful is now the Hustler.
The failure is now the millionaire.

I do not know what I am not
But I do know what I am
I have heard of the power of the spirit
To give, to deny, and to withdraw

This is what I have stuck to
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 11:31 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 9, 2016 at 12:07 AM
Hakeem, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 10, 2016 at 4:58 PM
Hakeem, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing -- ..SKAt
Nwagu Amudi Esq Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 10:13 AM
ups brother.
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August 4, 2011 at 8:35 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Hakeem. Love, Carol
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August 1, 2011 at 8:45 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Hakeem. Love, Carol
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December 1, 2010 at 6:14 AM
We are having our first laying snowfall this morning in Springfield,Ohio. December 1,2010 what a way to enter this month. It is absolutely beautiful and finds me in good spirits. I have enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Hakeem. Looking forward to reading more. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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