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As I grow like an unsure plant I hope to become a giant Oak tree It seems I do not control the moment Some have been tramped by heavy forces My friends have suddenly become tall As I seek to reach them They failed to look and to pull up Some fall down dirtily and fall forever In education the best I thought would succeed In education the worst I knew would fail But the successful is now the Hustler. The failure is now the millionaire. I do not know what I am not But I do know what I am I have heard of the power of the spirit To give, to deny, and to withdraw This is what I have stuck to

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Date: 3/9/2016 12:07:00 AM
Hakeem, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/10/2016 4:58:00 PM
Hakeem, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing -- ..SKAt
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Date: 8/17/2011 10:13:00 AM
ups brother.
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Date: 8/4/2011 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Hakeem. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2011 8:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Hakeem. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/1/2010 6:14:00 AM
We are having our first laying snowfall this morning in Springfield,Ohio. December 1,2010 what a way to enter this month. It is absolutely beautiful and finds me in good spirits. I have enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Hakeem. Looking forward to reading more. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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