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The Creeper

The next time you sleep don't enter your deep And allow the creeper, into your mind he'll creep Your inner shadows will darken as he seeks Shredding your thoughts, internally you'll weep He'll trawl through your secrets, no longer they'll be Your posterity has been raped, now the creeper sees Ones dark will get even deeper, into the abyss of your mind This seeker of the sleep, just what will he find http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/dark-8.php

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Aimee Garside

Date: 2/5/2011 2:00:00 PM

Wow this is......just amazing. One of my favourite poems I've ever read! So mysterious but also enchanting in the way you have wrote it. Very well done :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/18/2011 3:03:00 PM

Your theme reminds me of "Nightmare on Elm Street," where Freddie Krueger enters the dreams of unsuspecting teens. Being given to nightmares, I wish I knew how to keep the bad thoughts away. Great work, James! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/16/2011 6:52:00 AM

James, it is a good thing I am reading this one while it is still light outside :) Mr. Darkness himself came out to play.. Great write :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/16/2011 4:34:00 AM

Don't want to let that creeper in for sure..Good work..If for a contest, good luck...Your presence at my work is a felicitator of happiness to me..You probably would enjoy my work "The Total Disjoint" if you have time to read ..It is out of character for me...Sara

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 1/16/2011 1:59:00 AM

oooohhhhhhh I love the mysterious tones given from this write James, quite what would be found in my dreams I'm not sure he would want to know mind! lol. Great write, loved the read and could have read more on this... Well done. Thanks for your welcome comments on my write!

Sarah Hales

Date: 1/15/2011 5:08:00 PM

what will he find ? shivers sarah xx

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/15/2011 1:54:00 PM

there you go with that Stephen King-ish stuff again,making the hair on the back of my neck stand up......good one James