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The Creation

The Gods got together, Which created a plan, The Gods smiled, Which created your beauty, The Gods sang, Which created your voice, The Gods Cried, Which created your compassion, The Gods laughed, Which created your sense of humor, The Gods argued, Which created your vulnerability, The Gods were unsure, Which created your insecurities, The Gods finally agreed, Which created your strength, The Gods stepped back, Which created your independence, The Gods departed, You were born, The rest is up to you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/22/2012 3:09:00 AM
Awesome, i love this!
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Date: 2/21/2012 7:52:00 PM
wow, what a GREAT poem, one of your best. You should enter it into the soup contest, the big one next time they have it!!
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Date: 7/23/2011 9:09:00 PM
samual, congrats on your poem being featured this week,have yourself a wonderful weekend,..p.d.
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Date: 7/20/2011 4:50:00 AM
Hi Samuel, So fine a piece of poetry, you have here, and congrats, on your featured this week.
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Date: 7/17/2011 4:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Samual. Love, Carol
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