The Crazy Hunter

By: Ali Taha Alnobani

He did not do anything extraordinary
Did not discover the secret of happiness
And surely did not invent the machine that collects rays of the sun in a painting
He sat among his friends proud of his depravities
In an acted way of formalities
***
Now he can boast about his manhood
Like a foolish boy made of wood
"I spent a wonderful time with her
My soul flew with kisses
And my body was trembling
With a very nice relaxing!
She believed me
And when I left her
Her face was yellow
Like lemon
And my eyes were sparking
Like a demon".
***
Hunters have no heart
And crimes are their ribbon
His reverent silent friends were looking at him
"My mother taught me:
"It is not a shame for a man to deceive a woman
Females who give you themselves have no honor"
So I hunt women as if I were a trap"
He laughed loudly and removed his cap
Then he rubbed his mustache
And suddenly screamed
"I'm the king
When I touch my ring
I can swallow an angel".
***
So here in the dark world
We have two sides
Schools for male... And schools for female
Streets for male…and streets for female
Dusk for male… and another for female
And in between
We have crazy hunters
Fond of their depravities
***
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 23, 2016 at 8:43 PM
Great read Ali A... LINDA
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January 1, 2016 at 1:15 PM
ALI, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT
Gordon Avatar
April 17, 2011 at 2:12 AM
great poem by the way..really saw some true colors twirling in shades of black..you did it justice...the truth shown!
Gordon Avatar
April 17, 2011 at 2:11 AM
enjoy the friendships made in depravity...a lifelong commitment..and i do mean life long
Gordon Avatar
April 17, 2011 at 2:08 AM
i would agree he did not do anything extraordinary other then rebuke holy advice and hold hands with false visions of grandeur on pathetic lying profiles... praying for a more fruitful encounter with someone worthy of my time and form of praise, God forbid he accepts his own victimization of others with his selfishness of coming forward in truth, dont let anyone intervere with his undying happiness of living a life covertly, or posting porn on sites that 13 years old can read..
Gordon Avatar
April 17, 2011 at 2:05 AM
good things those deceiving men get locked down from heavens doors..good riddens...good poem, it is nice to read something that reminds me of people going to hades and remaining for deceiving women openly...
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