Andrea Dietrich Poet Personification

The Craziest Time In the Soup

I’m having the craziest time in the Soup
I never knew how perilous that it could be.
But since I landed here loopity-loop,
I’ve felt like the chicken of some really weird sea.

It sure looked delicious the first time that I flew
over the attractive bowl, so that’s why I swooped down.
But  then I got too low; my small body, it fell through
the surface of the creamy soup! Oh I fear I’ll drown!

My wings, how they’ve struggled, but it’s just too thick.
Cream of chicken, so tasty, is going to be my demise.
I’m sinking and I’m sinking and now I feel so sick.
Farewell! Beware of Soup, my dear fellow flies!


Aug. 7, 2020 for Caren Krutsinger's Craziest Time At The Poetry Contest
Choise 2: Craziest Time in the Soup

116 Words according to https://wordcounter.net/

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John Watt September 27, 2020 at 8:19 PM I was right (a rarity), Caren enjoyed your take and rewarded you with a win. Congrats!

Newton Ranaweera September 27, 2020 at 9:23 AM Congratulations on your win in the contest, Andrea!! I loved reading this great amusing piece!!

John Watt August 9, 2020 at 4:22 PM Another one I let slip by... my, how time 'flies'! So cute and clever, Andrea, being a fly drowning in the Soup! I bet Caren will be charmed by this.

Jack Horne August 9, 2020 at 4:15 AM LOL, loved this fun piece

Sigrid Ermine August 7, 2020 at 8:50 PM Poetry Solar System is a far more spacious name, less scope (perhaps) for soup comparisons such as too hot, etc.