Get Your Premium Membership

The Craziest Time In the Soup

I’m having the craziest time in the Soup I never knew how perilous that it could be. But since I landed here loopity-loop, I’ve felt like the chicken of some really weird sea. It sure looked delicious the first time that I flew over the attractive bowl, so that’s why I swooped down. But then I got too low; my small body, it fell through the surface of the creamy soup! Oh I fear I’ll drown! My wings, how they’ve struggled, but it’s just too thick. Cream of chicken, so tasty, is going to be my demise. I’m sinking and I’m sinking and now I feel so sick. Farewell! Beware of Soup, my dear fellow flies! Aug. 7, 2020 for Caren Krutsinger's Craziest Time At The Poetry Contest Choise 2: Craziest Time in the Soup 116 Words according to https://wordcounter.net/

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/27/2020 8:19:00 PM
I was right (a rarity), Caren enjoyed your take and rewarded you with a win. Congrats!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/27/2020 9:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Andrea!! I loved reading this great amusing piece!!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/9/2020 4:22:00 PM
Another one I let slip by... my, how time 'flies'! So cute and clever, Andrea, being a fly drowning in the Soup! I bet Caren will be charmed by this.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/9/2020 4:15:00 AM
LOL, loved this fun piece
Login to Reply
Date: 8/7/2020 8:50:00 PM
Poetry Solar System is a far more spacious name, less scope (perhaps) for soup comparisons such as too hot, etc.
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry