The Craving and the Raven

Pouting temptress
In sensual stare
Her white cotton dress
In see through bare
 
Her curves allure
To entice my rove
Excite's the man in me
To treasure her trove
 
Her magnetic eyes
Draw me in
Soon to be 
Skin to skin
 
Sweat-ed abrasion
Loin to loin
In her scented palace
Fantastical join
 
Recipe of love
In mixture mix
From the look in her eye
Had me transfixed
 
We lie back in sigh
Absorbing the craving
My temptress and I
And her jet black raven



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Delacroix Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 6:37 PM
Quite a passionate write about a very intimate moment. Nice work of the pen and nice rhyming. Caroline.
Kendrick Avatar
August 21, 2009 at 4:40 PM
The raven is different. Very passionate. Keep writing. Sara
Chircop Avatar
August 21, 2009 at 3:38 PM
SO BEAUTIFUL--love iis in the air and flowing in excellent verses--charma
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