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The Craving and the Raven

Pouting temptress In sensual stare Her white cotton dress In see through bare Her curves allure To entice my rove Excite's the man in me To treasure her trove Her magnetic eyes Draw me in Soon to be Skin to skin Sweat-ed abrasion Loin to loin In her scented palace Fantastical join Recipe of love In mixture mix From the look in her eye Had me transfixed We lie back in sigh Absorbing the craving My temptress and I And her jet black raven http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love4.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/22/2009 6:37:00 PM
Quite a passionate write about a very intimate moment. Nice work of the pen and nice rhyming. Caroline.
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Date: 8/21/2009 4:40:00 PM
The raven is different. Very passionate. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/21/2009 3:38:00 PM
SO BEAUTIFUL--love iis in the air and flowing in excellent verses--charma
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