The Crab

Cancer (21 June-22 July)

A good defence is the best offence
Smothering love and the moon's influence
Confronting my fear of fluid terrain
I'm constantly dancing in the rain
Protected in shell I supress my fear
of the past reoccouring, you wont find me here
For inside my shell beats a nurturing love
To wan my depression, this love's not enough
Ecstatically sad and chips on my shoulder
Borderline cuckoo and maybe bi-polar
I'm up them I'm down and very persistant
Sensitivity, the one trait consistant
From resentful and moody to sweet and sublime
Daydreaming, a favourite for passing the time
A typical crab with no fingers but claws
Close my beady eyes and ignore all the flaws
Hard but I'm soft and my humour is dry
As wet as a drip and aware I can't fly
So I'll wallow in rockpools of smiles and despair
Both sides of me make a wonderful pair.



16th June 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Freeman Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 8:09 AM
Jodie, a great job, very pleased to see an honorable win for you in Nette's contest. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 7:40 AM
Congrats Jodie on your fantastic win with this dynamic delight in zodiac zones luv..enjoy..
Mehta Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 5:11 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of nette, jodie
Pritts Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 4:21 AM
Another good one Jodie. You have a good rhyme scheme. This one is reminiscant of one I wrote called "Multiple Personalities". Give it a read if you would like. :-)
A  Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 4:59 AM
excellent poem jodie and good luck in contest *luv skat
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June 16, 2011 at 3:08 AM
I like this poem - Liz
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