The Cowichan River

The swimming hole at the river
Is where I learned to swim.
We'd spend many a summer day there
Climbing from limb to limb.

We learned to float and dog paddle
And dropped from branches into the stream.
Swing on rope swings, playing our games,
Remembering it is like a dream.

Whenever I see that old river
It brings a smile to my face.
Memories of my childhood
And a better time and place.

I see other children play there now
Creating memories of their own
And years from now they will remember
That river, and the best times they've known.





for Crystal Wilkin's "Childhood Memories" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 10:09 AM
A most deserved win Francine, many congratulations....:)
Duffin Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 7:25 AM
Hi Francine . Congratulations on your deserved success in the contest with this fine piece. May 2011 bring you peace and happiness. From Ireland and Eamon
Brown Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 5:44 AM
Congratulations on your win Francine in Crystal Wilkin's contest. Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 7:55 PM
Knew this was a winner. Many congratulations for this super win.
Laan Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 3:35 PM
I had a smile on my face reading this Francine as I can identify with so many of your memories. Oh to be a child again:)) Lovely poem.
Haick Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 1:54 PM
Congratulations on your great win in the contest, Francine! Blessings, peace, joy and happiness for the coming New Year! Love, Audrey
Sweetheart Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 12:38 PM
Congrats Francine on another super win in the Childhood Memories contest with this exceptional entry .. an awesome write u have penned my friend... enjoy with luv..
Mannan Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 8:50 PM
Such a enjoyable memory francine. You seem to have had a lovely childhood. All the very best for the contest.
Pettit Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 8:46 PM
I see I've got some strong competition in this contest. This Tom Sawyer/Huck Finn reasonable facsimile has pervasive descriptiveness and very good rhyming. Overall, an impressive submission.
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