Premiere Contest WinnerThe Cover of Moonbeam Lattice

Down the stairs turned chiseled rocky steps
the bare beauty cascades like an ebullient rapid
raw grace of Eve glistens on the satin skin
tinged with the hues of primeval nature exposed
sculpted in curvy contours of Michelangelo finesse
and charisma.

Amorous luster flowing in the cleaved vale
carved between the ambrosial mounds
opens up on the vista of the ivory meadow
supple rhythm of scented jasmine allure
wafts on the canopy of the yonder thicket
and waits.

The porcelain ballerina feet as insipid as
the stark sorrow of the defoliated winter tree
half-way on the staircase stuck motionless
a statue draped in symphony of au naturel shape
moonbeam lattice covers her with silver screen
and enigma.


October 11, 2019
A Brian Strand 1097 Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Alex Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 10:37 PM
"sculpted in curvy contours of Michelangelo finesse and charisma" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Gauthier Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 12:55 AM
Beautiful imagery, Subimal.
Kauffman Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 10:39 PM
Beautiful images skillfully blended together! Congratulations Sublimal.
Chiri Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 4:42 PM
Ahh my friend see you are right at the top with this fine piece here! Congrats on your top win!;)
Carber Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 2:41 PM
Lovely imagery! Congrats!
Chiri Avatar
December 11, 2019 at 3:47 AM
Beautiful win my friend!:)
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 2:21 PM
Hello Subimal Sinha-Roy, you have painted a beautiful scene with your words. Have a nice day my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 12:21 PM
Gorgeous writing, Subimal. Congrats on your win.
Dutta Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 12:47 AM
BIG CONGRATS TO WIN TOP. Regards.
Hamilton Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 2:35 PM
Congrats Subimal, you've been winning my contests with regularity, now it seems everyone else is discovering your talent. This is certainly one of your best writes and I'm going to fave it!
Mcgee Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 9:52 AM
An enigma of Grace descending. Congrats on the first place!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 7:24 AM
Lovely! Congratulations, Subimal!
Rose  Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 6:06 AM
You took me to another level of fantasy dear Roy, congratulations on your 1st place win, Awesome poem.
Ravidas Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 4:18 AM
Raw grace of gold) Gorgeous cascades.
Lawless Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 7:04 PM
This is sooooo good on soooo many levels that i had to place it first. "the porcelain ballerina feet".... DAMN!!! loved it....thought of reading it to my wife and telling her I wrote it....thanks for participating in the contest
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 4:41 AM
Thank you so much for the placement and for the comments. I feel extremely honoured.
Green Avatar
October 11, 2019 at 10:02 AM
This was gorgeous, I absolutely loved this. The title drew me in and the poem held me in place staring at all of the beauty that was waiting inside. You have captured the essence of this contest perfectly. Bravo poet!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 4:39 AM
Thank you so much for your comments
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