The Couple Who Lived In 4-E

Behind caution tape, I stand in the shade
watching a wrecking ball, tethered to sway
And soon with a gasp from the crowd standing by
A piece of the past is ready to die

I am seeing a lifetime, as it falls to the ground
the old tenement house, on Avery Street

For years it was home, to folks across town
Rarely do people now straddle it's shores
Where the root-buckled sidewalks lead up to the doors
And feet skipped over the cracks, with swift daily chores

All the chalked hopscotch lines have since washed away
along with laughter and the gold of the day
Summertime colors have withered and fled
Into bruised, battered bricks, of memories bled

Now, forsaken, this dethroned queen
With broken limbs and shattered eyes
of shards of glass, and broken lives 
Still haunt the northwest wing

Thick layers of dust, cover the limpid leaves
of an old silk rose, within a vase
and reminds the gloom of dime store trips
when the passing lives, that used to be
were alive with simple certainty

A curtain, torn, hangs by a thread
and shivers, laced within the wind
A haven, built, of brick and clay
Defaced, disgraced, red-brick decay

Each story told, each life it held
Now crumbles with each stone, once laid

There were some who still remember, well
The ones who lived above the rim
By whom you could set the clock
By footsteps walked on wooden stairs
Who made this place a home

Now far away, the gossips say 
"Their health had failed, such hell to pay
For now it seems to live each day
Someone has to tell them...
When to eat, when to dress and when to bathe"

People had watched them come and go
It was always with hand in hand...
Their music was heard between the cracks
Mozart, Bach, Glenn Miller bands

They had lived here forty years or more
Or so the legend goes....
No one really knows for sure, but know it was for years...

But now a flower in a vase
Is covered dust to dust
The lights turned off, no sigh, no trace...
with windows black, and lyrics lost

The wave that came, went back to sea
Like the hopes that fade away
Tomorrow's dreams have come and gone
to leave a winter's song
And is the only thing that holds the years
From waning into none....



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Mehta Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 5:07 AM
Fine ode and congrats on the fine win in the contest, Carrie
A  Avatar
January 13, 2014 at 2:22 PM
CARRIE, :) CONGRATS.... Love ~ SKAT~
Brown Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 4:12 AM
Congratulations on your win in Matt Caliri's "Empty Apartment" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
December 18, 2010 at 8:42 PM
Congrats Carrie on your super win in the Empty Apt. contest with this excellent entry .. enjoy with luv..
Duffin Avatar
December 18, 2010 at 10:16 AM
Hi Carrie. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Eamon
Scripca Avatar
December 17, 2010 at 8:34 PM
Congratulations, my very, very talented friend. A well deserved win. I am so proud of Carrie :)
Devonshire Avatar
December 17, 2010 at 11:40 AM
I knew this would be a winner, Carrie. Congratulations!! Love, Carolyn
Onclaud Avatar
December 17, 2010 at 11:23 AM
wow, carrie, a real treat… hats off to you for the award!! huggs, nette
Duffin Avatar
December 17, 2010 at 8:00 AM
Hi Carrie.Congratulations for this great piece . Sad but with so many lasting images. Their music was heard between the floorboards; Now a flower withers in it's vase; Where tomorrow's dreams have come and gone. Those graphic lines made the hairs stand on the back of my neck. Thanking you for your welcome comment. Luck, peace and happiness to you and yours. Eamon
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November 26, 2010 at 5:50 PM
I can tell now that Matt is going to have a Very tough time judging this contest-- I've read amazing ones and this definitely belongs to that group, Carrie :)! How sad indeed when children do that to their aging parents-- you've woven such a sad reality here but so beautifully & vividly written-- I also think your repeating line is quite effective in emphasizing that sadness-- hugs & belated Happy Thanksgiving to you :)-- nikko :)
Goff Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 8:32 PM
Carrie....very moving poetry.... awesome talent my friend! thanks for the congrats and happy thanksgiving! jimbo
Devonshire Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 6:56 PM
I had chills thinking of the seniors being told when to eat, dress and bathe. Who cares for elders who have no children? I wonder what the future holds for us. I love the way you described the atmosphere in the neighborhood and the last verse where the hopes and dreams are carried out to sea on the tides of time. Excellent entry for the contest, Carrie! Best wishes for success as well as a Happy Thanksgiving. Love, Carolyn
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November 24, 2010 at 6:35 PM
Wow! Carrie, now this one is impressive,, all the ones I read are views of themselves.. Now i like the way you write the emptiness of another space being missed by others... Enjoyed your poem, and have a wonderful blessed Thanksgiving day,. always,..P.D.
Flach Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 4:43 PM
You sure do paint a vivid picture with words. I see the scene you discribe as if it were dispayed on my TV screen or hanging in an art gallery. ANd I know the couple you refer to as if they were real people in my almost real world. Nicely written. I love your free verse with subtle rhyming strewn all about. Nice technique. Joe
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November 24, 2010 at 3:01 AM
Ow that is life. .they lived a happy one it seems. .they loved together and rest together,and now 'the flower wither in a vase. .touching,and deep!
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November 23, 2010 at 6:51 PM
You have captured it here, haven't you, Carrie. No doubt about it. This poem is a success within itself. Masterful and drawing. Top notch, Carrie.
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