The Country Road

I took a walk along the old country road looking desperately for a story that is not yet told, I search in the bushes and the trees but there was nothing waiting for thee.

The morning with its bright petals gleaming in the clouds and an army of birds swarm the sky moving around in slow motion communicating with the big birds on the ground and I watch them flying all around.

Something was going on, but I could not understand so I took a walk on the beach and saw thousands of birds gathered on the shore holding court and keeping a conference on the sand.

There was nothing to write about, so I continued my journey in the woods until I found a squirrel climbing out of a hole from the tree, its eyes move quickly around and for a split second it stares directly at me and hurried quickly down the tree and ran in the bushes.

I looked around to see what I could find but nothing was there except rows and rows of trees and the water flowing from a nearby stream. I took a deep breath and absorbed the wilderness around and sat on a log that lay across the stream and suddenly my childhood dream came back to haunt me.

It is the solitude that was all around and the braying donkey laden with goods going to town, and the woodpecker making a strange sound in the hole. It sounds like someone was knocking on the door and suddenly the entire place came alive, and the universe whispered in my ears and, said, "you are mine." I looked around to see who it was, but just one bird was standing on the tree limb looking.

I hurried away from that place and went back on the main road and walked a quarter of a mile before I could see any assemble of life; the country dust pushes me on and the rhythm in my feet drag me along; it is the deity that I could not understand, and I contemplate the scale as I journey up the lonely street.

I walked about half a mile and suddenly I broke down and cry; I wasn’t sure what I was sobbing about but the memory of the moose and how it gorges out my wisdom tooth overshadowed me. 

Not too far from where I was, I came up on a little country shop, so I stopped to get some water, I walked in, but   no one was there, and I saw blood on the counter and a man lying in a pool of blood in the corner.

 I held my mouth and scream, and a car came out of nowhere and I suddenly woke up out of the dream.

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Date: 3/5/2024 8:47:00 AM
Dear Christine, Your poem took me on a profound journey of introspection and wonder. The amazing imagery and emotional depth woven throughout left me captivated. Your exploration of solitude, nature, and the mysteries of life are very contemplative. This is a beautiful piece of writing. I think relate well because I grew up on the Farmlands of Gettysburg and we were on a country road. Loved Reading, - Blessings, Daniel Warm regards,
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