The Cost of Closeness

It’s hard to tell if they’re playing tag,
or thrusting nectar-drunk love at each other—
mid-June attempts at getting it.

Maybe they’re fighting over first flowers—
legs twitching in hypoglycemic half-paralysis,
like the buzz of waking mid-vacation,
still dazed, muscles aching, but that stinger,
coiled stiff for the week. 

Their terror-tails would end me,
or at least suspend me, breath held between
here and wherever histamine takes it.
I appreciate the bees, I really do,
their work, their faith in growing things.
But the anaphylactic risk of their existence
in relation to mine turns close proximity
into a kill-or-die situation:

all stabs and fury, and neither of us
wanting it to end that way.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 6/13/2025 1:56:00 AM
Bees are admirable in many ways. But they have stings which can endanger our lives. Some bees are deadly with a kind of poison in their stings. Some people are severely allergic to their bites. My nephew has such a problem. So he avoids proximity to bees. Jaymee, stay safe, if you have that anaphylactic risk.
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 6/13/2025 5:48:00 AM
Yep, I carry an epi-pen every time I step foot out of the house during summer. Bees are so, so important to the ecosystem though. I hate that we have to avoid each other lol
Date: 6/12/2025 1:42:00 PM
Bees. Gotta have 'em. But yeah, when they sting they generally die so not smart (a result no doubt of their having teeny weeny brains), but to think they can inflict a death sting - whoa! There's a subtle humor to this Jaymee
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/13/2025 3:59:00 PM
Engagement is everything Jaymee. You're too good to be sitting on the periphery. Social media is designed to be, well, social :)
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 6/13/2025 2:04:00 PM
Yeah, I've been knocking about here for more than two years now, figured it was time to show my face. Regarding your comment on my level of engagement increasing (on thriveni's poem- I didn't want to distract from her piece responding there) -- it was something you wrote a while back that made me self-reflect on that. You were right. Thank you for that feedback.
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/13/2025 6:37:00 AM
Hey nice photo
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 6/12/2025 3:53:00 PM
Thanks, Tom. This made me laugh because bees are actually super intelligent by certain objective measures. I have a hunch you are well aware of that though xD You're very generous in your attention to fellow poets. I appreciate the appreciation. Have a great weekend :)
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