Paulette Calasibetta Poet Verse

The Cosmos

An ecumenical crown
                                 Illuminating the night sky,
                                 A celestial carousel
                                 Cosmic stars, travel with Greek heros.










For: A Poem Crafted in the Various Lind30 Poetry Contest
       Created by Robert Lindley
Form Used: Lind30SU
Syllable count 7/7/7/9  ~checked on Poetry Soup Syllable Counter
Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: January 30, 2022

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Paula Goldsmith February 25, 2022 at 11:26 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful sky travel write. Have a great/blessed day.................

Delice Arleen Skelly February 2, 2022 at 7:51 AM Paulette, This had me thinking of Mount Olympus home of the Greek Immortals..Delice Paulette Calasibetta February 2, 2022 at 8:57 AM Glad I was able to evoke the imagery to life! As always I appreciate your stopping by to comment. :)Paulette

Joanna Daniel February 2, 2022 at 6:01 AM Exhilarating imagery of the night sky, Paulette:) should place high:) Paulette Calasibetta February 2, 2022 at 9:01 AM Thank you Jo~ The night sky is a revolving book of imagery~glad you enjoyed it. :) Paulette

Len Gasun February 1, 2022 at 4:27 AM Awesome poem with a fantastic imagery. I enjoyed reading your poem. Good luck in the contest too and thanks for stopping by. Hugs. Paulette Calasibetta February 1, 2022 at 1:39 PM Thank you for stopping by to comment. Glad you enjoyed the imagery; hope you could see the night sky too! :) Paulette

Anil Deo January 31, 2022 at 2:43 AM Nicely said; not quite pagan, LOL! Paulette Calasibetta January 31, 2022 at 7:42 AM Looking at it strictly from the perspective of a poetic astronomer~LOL! thanks for stopping by to comment. :) Paulette

Vijay Pandit January 30, 2022 at 1:32 PM Wonderfully descriptive poem--succinctly done. Paulette Calasibetta January 30, 2022 at 2:25 PM Thank Vijay~love the night sky! :) Paulette