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The Corridor

Confidently The door swings open, to the furthest reach of its hinges Air set alight by her presence, the crowd is drawn Swinging her arms without a care, they are boundless With steps that echo, evidently faultless and proud Cutting swiftly through the waves, the masses part instinctively The vague war cry dominates, even when it doesn't connect Refusing to settle, for any lesser impact For she will march triumphantly, through the shackled masks Comparable to puppets, they are but ghosts in a machine Hesitantly The hinges part way, as the door creeps into the room Conforming to the heard, with a silence that shall not falter Arms rigid and cutting through the air, he is curbed and confined With a muted pigeon's step, evidently nervy and fitful Hit by the torrent, subjected to an eternity of abrasion Voices resonate and surround, but this one stays muted Venomous and yet withdrawn, he refrains from making an impact For he will trudge regrettably, through the unending exchange Comparable to puppeteers, the others seem confident and free

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Date: 6/15/2016 10:26:00 AM
The yin and yang, the feminine and masculine. Depicted for the lost and the found.
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Date: 1/26/2016 3:01:00 PM
An impressive and excellent first poem submitted to Soup, Michael! You are no beginner! I like especially the contrast between the two parts. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 1/8/2016 5:50:00 PM
Awesome... very good descriptive write ~~X~~
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Michael Whatley
Date: 1/9/2016 2:57:00 PM
Thanks Kim!
Date: 12/31/2015 7:01:00 AM
Wonderful verse! This one got me speechless...you are an amazing poet with exquisite, exceptional talent. Keep up the great work, buddy! Thanks for your visit to my poems. Please read more and comment on them. Your encouragements means a lot to me.
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Michael Whatley
Date: 12/31/2015 7:25:00 AM
Can't thank you enough J.W. I will be sure to do so, as I know exactly how you feel. Seeing the responses, is one of the best things about PoetrySoup. They say that other people can see you better than you can see yourself, and that's why It's paramount to have some familiar voices to follow you, wherever your poetic endeavors take you.
Date: 12/31/2015 6:18:00 AM
Love this!! Really enjoyed it. Very moving.
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Date: 12/27/2015 1:24:00 PM
Welcome my dear Michael to poetry soup , I hope u find it as a comfort zone and I hope u consider it as ur second home...u r truly gifted , ur gonna have a great future as ur poems these are a magnificent, brilliant and remarkable writings, I might be too young but I can understand alot when it comes to beautiful and great poetry....Happy new year and hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 12/16/2015 9:01:00 PM
Michael, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Michael Whatley
Date: 12/18/2015 4:11:00 AM
Thank you Skat for the warm welcome!
Date: 12/16/2015 8:52:00 PM
Michael, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Michael Whatley
Date: 12/18/2015 4:10:00 AM
Thank you Linda for the warm welcome!

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