The Core

It's rotten in the bottom of the core of love.
Crunched up and tossed, once found now lost.
Glimmers like teases poke and whisper.
Tickle and blind me with their shimmers.

The shake from the quake craked the center,
All the love slivered away to the hate bay.

Some say it was ment and others no comment,
but something happened that night.

As the core tries to gather the loss,
sinks deeper in dirt covered moss 
with nothing it stays in its sorrows,
and dreams no more.

"Farewell" the core said and whimpered off.
Trying to catch the glimmers once lost.
Not knowing that this is the end,
Of feeling ever again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/27/2011 11:05:00 PM
Congrats Skylee on your poem being featured. Vince
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Date: 7/27/2011 10:53:00 AM
A feature of the week congratulations! Good job... Caryl
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Date: 7/27/2011 10:52:00 AM
A feature of the week congratulations! Good job... Caryl
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Date: 7/25/2011 1:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Skylee. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/30/2010 4:16:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Sadee. I will be back after the New Year to read more of your poetry. Wishing you a very Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/29/2010 2:29:00 PM
I absolutely loved your poem. Your style in similair to my own. Happy writing!
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