The Cool Breath of Fall

There is a chill in the air,
Promises of Winter are everywhere.
Hints that Winter is on the way
Can be found inside and out.
People blow breath rings in the early dawn,
And school children run and shout.

Grass turns brown and withers,
And sweaters feel good at night.
It is a welcome season,
When hot weather is gone from sight!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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September 26, 2016 at 9:49 PM
Well done, Betty! Congratulations! ...Fran
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September 26, 2016 at 10:03 PM
Thank you Francis!
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September 26, 2016 at 7:03 PM
Betty-lovely poem :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Butler Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 7:14 PM
Thank you so much Laura.
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