The Controller

His goal to totally control
Harder he tried more life capsized
Now wonders what happened to soul
Eternity reveals untold
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 8/22/2010 8:33:00 AM
Powerful write, Sara! I hate controllers too!!! Thank you for stopping by and commenting on my work...Gert
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Date: 8/21/2010 11:18:00 AM
uncomprehendable
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Date: 8/20/2010 8:43:00 PM
I can't stand controllers, Sara, I know a few personally!! well,thanks for dashing my dreams of life slowing down (from the comment on my vow senryu.) hahaha. I think you is right! LUv, andrea
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Date: 8/20/2010 3:52:00 PM
Trying to control another person's behavior is always a mistake. Good thoughts penned here succinctly in a form that's new to me. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/20/2010 3:43:00 PM
Hey mom! enjoyed reading today, your wonderful poetry! I wrote a new one.
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Date: 8/20/2010 3:32:00 PM
What a powerful piece of poetry Sara.. and a form I have not heard of nor seen on site here.. very intriguing and creative.. enjoyed wise words.. with luv..
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Date: 8/20/2010 3:27:00 PM
Smile ~ Now this sounds as if it would be a very hard lesson learned "Dear Precious and Gifted Sara Kendrick" ~ And one could hope that as the thief upon The Cross Next to Christ that, they find Mercy before the light is perhaps forever gone from their Precious Eyes ~ Hope Your doing well dear and, I love the thoughts born amid this well written poem ~ "Much Love to You and Yours, Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Beautiful Day Dear Sara;" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 8/20/2010 3:00:00 PM
i had to read this more then once. a controller will always lose their power just to learn something.. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 8/20/2010 2:00:00 PM
Nice one,, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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