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The Connection

The Connection I lay On the ground I feel the breeze Watch the trees They wave to me I wave back I say “Hello” I see The blue sky A cloud drifts by Soft and white It winks at me I wink back I say “Hello” I hear The water on the rocks I know it clear and cool The ducks are cruising buy They quack at me I quack back I say “Hello” I feel The sun It is bright and warm It makes me blush It peaks at me I peak back I say “Hello” I want To stay here I feel lazy I hear someone They sneak up I stay very still I say “Hello”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/19/2011 10:04:00 PM
2nd reading. Let me just say hello. Lying there and enjoying nature is the greatest feeling in life next to love. Combine the two and you have Euphoria. :-)
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Date: 6/10/2011 12:45:00 AM
You are certainly one with nature. You have an innocence in your words that brings that out. Nothing could be more delightful. Keep on putting it into word.
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Date: 5/8/2011 9:19:00 AM
A fun write, with a serious side to it. It is good to simply be quiet and still sometimes...whilst taking in the sights and sounds of the natural world around us.
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Date: 11/25/2010 6:29:00 PM
enjoyed
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