The Condition

If her heart shall settle so
Like plucked-off leaves where there's no breeze
Like ice or fallen snow
Strewn on those fields where there's no one,
I’ll be to her like is the ground
That’s always a floor
when these things fall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 3:21 PM
Oh what a wonderful potent little poem, my favourite kind. Fave and a seven for this sublime offering :) xomo!
Amezimi Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 4:53 PM
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you.... I'm glad it appeals to you Maureen.
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