James Fraser Poet Rhyme

The Concert

This moment I've been awaiting for a number of years
To see ones heroes live see them crunching their gears
I'm on my way to Glasgow with workmates and friends
To finally see live their fantastic tracks they have penned

Anticipation now flows into the concert arena we await
It's the buzz, the hungered wishing, terrific time trait
The moments now close for the lights start to dim
For this three piece on song a most wonderful vim

Strobe lights, Bass intro, my awaiting now starts
To us fans they're our hymns soon singing our hearts
Shouting cheering hearing the first vocals now voiced
To the chorus now reached such incredible rejoice

Mellow chords to lead guitar which slice through the air
Decibels so loud for we simply sing and just stare
Drum solo so immense it's orchestral to our ears
So energetic melodic sublime, to magnificent tier

Thanks, plaudits are shared, encore after encore
It's not just their lyrics, it's their quite beautiful scores
This moment I've been awaiting for a number of year's
To see ones heroes live, I have to admit there were tears




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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores October 20, 2015 at 5:20 PM Excellent poem. Music is one of my passions.

Robert Lindley June 19, 2015 at 9:34 AM I went to many Rock concerts back in late 60's through the 70/80's and you described the experience so well, so vividly. At and a great poem my friend! Robert Lindley August 15, 2015 at 5:55 PM AC/DC in 1979 on their Highway To Hell tour.. Now Soup Mail me the answer to my past question. James Fraser June 19, 2015 at 1:20 PM Thank you Robert, I believe this contest has been concluded. Can you guess which band I'm writing about. Guess right and I'll Soup Mail you an answer to your past Question, smiles always for your my poetry friend. Have a wonderful weekend, James :) :)

James Peranteau June 12, 2015 at 10:15 PM James my friend, it is wonderful to find the soul who can reverberate a score without the harken of instruments dear poet ! You have magically accomplished this feat easily ! TY...also, I went to two Queen concerts...the first one was their famous, "we are the champions" intro. I think that is when I started loosing my hearing *smiles* Later my friend..much love, james James Fraser June 13, 2015 at 1:18 PM James, this is a concert I so desired to see, and I'm glad I did. I've seen them since, but I doubt again. Blessed to your Saturday, and the lovely Sunday. Many hugs for you, always, love James :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 12, 2015 at 6:55 AM Huge James, love the soft melofic flow of your poem but the lively way you let the soubds be heard throughbyour pen is wow..! I so love the line mellow chords slicing the air... =')(((hugs)))xxx~olive eloisa Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 15, 2015 at 7:15 PM I realize how so many mistakes in the spelling.. :(!weee shame. Anyway, yes someday one day we will.. hugs~olive eloisa James Fraser June 13, 2015 at 1:15 PM Little one, you'll be going to a concert with the Huge One soon. I've never taken a girl to a concert, so taking a special girl ;-) WOW, hugs, your James xxxx

Diane Christian June 11, 2015 at 1:44 PM A great write, very expressive I like that, Thanks for your kind comments on my poems James Fraser June 13, 2015 at 1:01 PM Your welcome Diane, always, and thank you also. Blessed weekend to you, hugs, James :)

Nette Onclaud June 9, 2015 at 11:45 PM i can imagine the pure joy of experiencing music through your engaging, lively piece, prince james... carry on, whoo!..huggs James Fraser June 12, 2015 at 12:36 PM Hiya Nette, I so love Music, especially Rock and Progressive Rock amongst other genres. The concert I write about was simply fantastic. Blessed weekend to you :) :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich June 9, 2015 at 6:08 PM I like how you really focused on their SOUND. That is major importance in a contest. Good luck in the contest James. James Fraser June 12, 2015 at 12:11 PM Thank you Andrea, it was a fantastic concert, and thankfully I've seen them twice. Happy weekend to you and yours, hugs//James xx

M. L. Kiser June 9, 2015 at 3:06 PM Beautifully penned; I felt that I was there. Jan Allison June 11, 2015 at 1:45 PM I would have loved to see pink floyd and Fleetwood Mac - sadly no one floats my boat these days lol:-) husg jan xx

Jan Allison June 9, 2015 at 2:44 PM Such vivid description James and I've felt all these emotions you describe especially when I saw Queen at Knebworth- good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7 James Fraser June 11, 2015 at 1:42 PM So loved concerts Jan. I don't go to many now, probably because I've seen who I've wanted to see. Sadly I never seen Queen, my favourite band, hugs//James xx