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Monoku Marc Chagall Contest hosted by Dilly Dally ~ August 23, 2024

The Concert by Marc Chagall 1957

moonlight and a Parisian concert ~ floating along the Seine, inert primary colors on canvas spilled ~ artist's perspective was fulfilled

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/28/2024 2:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning work that is in the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K

Jan Allison

Date: 8/28/2024 3:04:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats Lin, glad we were both on the winners list:-) hugs jan xx

thriveni c mysore

Date: 8/27/2024 9:46:00 PM

congratulations dear poet. cheers.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/27/2024 10:16:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "The Concert" Monoku write again. Love your second line. Great addition.... Have a blessed day writing away...........

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/27/2024 5:43:00 AM

Back with congrats, Lin!

Karen Jones

Date: 8/27/2024 4:52:00 AM

I miss missed this painting love your interpretation of it! Congratulations on your placement!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/25/2024 5:58:00 PM

I’ve never seen this one! You worked this very well!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/24/2024 1:35:00 PM

I enjoyed reading "The Concert" write. "Good Luck" Your Monoku is very creative/wonderful. I have never seen these painting, bet they are pretty in real life. I did not see this one when I picked mine. The picture will Not load in for me. Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away......................

Lin Lane
Date: 8/24/2024 1:51:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. I've added a second Monoku after checking with the sponsor. Chagall's work warrants a second look... some more 'creative' than others.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/24/2024 10:43:00 AM

Lin I've got to say I find the image in the painting quite bizarre but i guess that's 'modern ' art for you, I do like your interpretation in so few words! lol:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2024 3:51:00 PM

aww thanks Lin xx

Lin Lane
Date: 8/24/2024 3:31:00 PM

then so you shall. Next time she's over, I'll have her paint something after looking at a Chagall. ;-)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2024 3:10:00 PM

love the additional monoku, would love to see one of Eloise's artworks, hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 8/24/2024 1:24:00 PM

I think Eloise could paint as Chagall did. She doesn't always paint her people standing on the ground. I should show her some of his paintings. Thanks for the comments, chick.

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/24/2024 9:23:00 AM

A dreamlike scape you paint for us here Lin, and have written a fantastic monoku bringing the (inert) concert to life, I’ve wanted to do just that at some of the concerts I’ve been too in the past! Cheers David

Lin Lane
Date: 8/24/2024 1:23:00 PM

Thanks, David. Sometimes we struggle for the right thought, correct word to fit what we are trying to say, and sometimes they just float along on their own. That kind of concert hurts the ears. lol

Aysha Nuwas

Date: 8/24/2024 12:46:00 AM

Beautiful, very beautiful.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/24/2024 1:22:00 PM

Thank you very much, Aysha.

Daniel Caplin

Date: 8/23/2024 1:57:00 PM

This is such a wonderful interpretation of Chagalls art and so rosemantically expressed , best wishes for contest . Danny

Lin Lane
Date: 8/23/2024 2:02:00 PM

Lol Danny. Your ‘rosemantically’ should be a poetic term. Nice merging of flowery love. Thanks for the read and thoughts.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/23/2024 1:49:00 PM

Love your interpretation of the picture Lin, I must confess I'd never heard of him. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 8/23/2024 1:58:00 PM

Thank you, Tom. His paintings are a bit off kilter so I appreciate them with a Picasso eye.