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Monoku Marc Chagall Contest hosted by Dilly Dally ~ August 23, 2024

The Concert by Marc Chagall 1957

The Concert


moonlight and a Parisian concert ~ floating along the Seine, inert

primary colors on canvas spilled ~ artist's perspective was fulfilled

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Sara Kendrick

August 28, 2024 at 2:14 PM

Congratulations on your winning work that is in the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K

Jan Allison

August 28, 2024 at 3:04 AM

dropping back with my congrats Lin, glad we were both on the winners list:-) hugs jan xx

thriveni c mysore

August 27, 2024 at 9:46 PM

congratulations dear poet. cheers.

Paula Goldsmith

August 27, 2024 at 10:16 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "The Concert" Monoku write again. Love your second line. Great addition.... Have a blessed day writing away...........

Kim Rodrigues

August 27, 2024 at 5:43 AM

Back with congrats, Lin!

Karen Jones

August 27, 2024 at 4:52 AM

I miss missed this painting love your interpretation of it! Congratulations on your placement!

Kim Rodrigues

August 25, 2024 at 5:58 PM

I’ve never seen this one! You worked this very well!

Paula Goldsmith

August 24, 2024 at 1:35 PM

I enjoyed reading "The Concert" write. "Good Luck" Your Monoku is very creative/wonderful. I have never seen these painting, bet they are pretty in real life. I did not see this one when I picked mine. The picture will Not load in for me. Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away......................

Lin Lane

August 24, 2024 at 1:51 PM

Thank you, Paula. I've added a second Monoku after checking with the sponsor. Chagall's work warrants a second look... some more 'creative' than others.

Jan Allison

August 24, 2024 at 10:43 AM

Lin I've got to say I find the image in the painting quite bizarre but i guess that's 'modern ' art for you, I do like your interpretation in so few words! lol:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison

August 24, 2024 at 3:51 PM

aww thanks Lin xx

Lin Lane

August 24, 2024 at 3:31 PM

then so you shall. Next time she's over, I'll have her paint something after looking at a Chagall. ;-)

Jan Allison

August 24, 2024 at 3:10 PM

love the additional monoku, would love to see one of Eloise's artworks, hugs jan xx

Lin Lane

August 24, 2024 at 1:24 PM

I think Eloise could paint as Chagall did. She doesn't always paint her people standing on the ground. I should show her some of his paintings. Thanks for the comments, chick.

David Kavanagh

August 24, 2024 at 9:23 AM

A dreamlike scape you paint for us here Lin, and have written a fantastic monoku bringing the (inert) concert to life, I’ve wanted to do just that at some of the concerts I’ve been too in the past! Cheers David

Lin Lane

August 24, 2024 at 1:23 PM

Thanks, David. Sometimes we struggle for the right thought, correct word to fit what we are trying to say, and sometimes they just float along on their own. That kind of concert hurts the ears. lol