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The Conception of My Affection

My eyes they saw you fine as can be with features a goddess would own I tried to compare you with others I see but naturally you stood alone I scattered your picture well in my heart so your face was all it could see I later discovered that this was the start of a wonderful feeling in me I’ve pondered the thought of being forever with you the one I endear I strongly believe we can be together with something deep and sincere I feel at home when in your arms, I never want to leave For wrapped up in your alluring charm, I’ll always want to be Written in Queens, New York -Circa 1995

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Date: 10/18/2013 4:40:00 PM
As always, your poems cause my to think romantic things...not good...not good at all. Lol
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Date: 10/19/2013 1:49:00 PM
Christina, romance is always good girl, we need more of it in the world...don't you think??? LOL! Thanks! MC
Date: 8/30/2013 10:29:00 PM
Very gorgeous sincere right marquis,,,, you make me wanna leave the one im with,,,start a new relationship lol jk jk ,,,(had a usher moment) wink wink:0) just playing....lovely my friend x~<3~ cherie
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Date: 8/31/2013 5:53:00 AM
Oh yes, I remember that song LOL! It's okay, I have that effect sometimes -or so I'm told (wink-wink) LOL! Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it! MC
Date: 8/25/2013 3:33:00 PM
enchanting !
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Date: 8/31/2013 5:52:00 AM
Thanks Yvette, however you my friend are enchanting LOL!!! Thanks! MC
Date: 8/11/2013 8:13:00 PM
Lovely write you write lovely love poem, soft and gentle I can't write love poems but I like to read beautiful poems such as yours blessings sueellen
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Date: 8/31/2013 5:51:00 AM
Awww, thanks Sue-Ellen! I sure if you gave it a good ol' heart-felt try, you'd write a wonderful poem on love. Hope you do, I'd love to read it!!! Thanks again! MC

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