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The Coming of Night

A slow red sun cut through the soft gray sky, To warm my eyes with layered painted light. Birds shadows glide on the wind's goodbye. Their fragile wings carry them from the night. Day's end changes coats as night creatures sing, To bring harmonies to the ear's delight. Night's dim stars appear like an uncoiled string. The dark cloth of time envelops twilight, To end the sunlight's quiet turning spool, As I watch in awe of this changing scene, I find my silent presence minuscule, Only my whispered thanks will intervene. This moonlit cathedral with rising face, Has ended this day, it has been replaced. written 12/4/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/9/2017 6:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/8/2017 3:31:00 AM
Frederic - sincere congratulations on your well-earned win, my friend, and blessings for more such recognition of your wonderful writing talents! Keep up the great work!
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Date: 10/7/2017 5:08:00 PM
Frederic, your poem is so soothing, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement!
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Date: 9/12/2016 8:49:00 AM
You took it home with those last two lines. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/8/2016 11:00:00 AM
Frederic, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "Tonight I will Write" and enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 10/8/2015 1:51:00 AM
Perfect pen Frederic! Congrats on yet another win!
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Date: 10/2/2015 10:49:00 PM
Frederic, it's nice to see this one with a new placement. Congrats!!!!! LOVE **SKAT**
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Date: 10/1/2015 7:47:00 PM
There is something about the twilight hour that always makes me want to whisper softly. (Same with your lovely poem!) Congratulations, Frederic!
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Date: 10/1/2015 4:27:00 PM
Oh this is such a lovely sonnet on a lovely evening. One indeed feels miniscule when you contemplate the vastness and beauty of the sky and the constellations. Congrats, Frederic!
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Date: 1/20/2015 5:52:00 AM
Nice poem well composed, congrats on the win, Frederic
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Date: 1/19/2015 11:23:00 PM
Back again wid big congrats on this winning awesome write Frederic! So perfectly crafted !
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Date: 12/5/2014 12:36:00 AM
This is amazingly beautiful Frederic! Really one of ur best ! perfect 7 and my fav! Gl in contest!
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Date: 12/4/2014 10:00:00 PM
Lots of gorgeous imagery, Frederic. did you get it entered in time? I think that contest filled up super fast!
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Date: 12/4/2014 6:24:00 PM
You painted a brilliant picture in my mind here Frederic - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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