The Coming of Night

A slow red sun cut through the soft gray sky,
To warm my eyes with layered painted light.
Birds shadows glide on the wind's goodbye.
Their fragile wings carry them from the night.
Day's end changes coats as night creatures sing,
To bring harmonies to the ear's delight.
Night's dim stars appear like an uncoiled string.
The dark cloth of time envelops twilight,
To end the sunlight's quiet turning spool,
As I watch in awe of this changing scene,
I find my silent presence minuscule,
Only my whispered thanks will intervene.

This moonlit cathedral with rising face,
Has ended this day, it has been replaced.


written 12/4/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Roberts Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 6:39 AM
Congrats on your win :)
Barden Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 3:31 AM
Frederic - sincere congratulations on your well-earned win, my friend, and blessings for more such recognition of your wonderful writing talents! Keep up the great work!
La France Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 5:08 PM
Frederic, your poem is so soothing, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement!
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September 12, 2016 at 8:49 AM
You took it home with those last two lines. Congrats on your win.
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September 8, 2016 at 11:00 AM
Frederic, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "Tonight I will Write" and enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
A. Sharma Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 1:51 AM
Perfect pen Frederic! Congrats on yet another win!
A  Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 10:49 PM
Frederic, it's nice to see this one with a new placement. Congrats!!!!! LOVE **SKAT**
Richards Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 7:47 PM
There is something about the twilight hour that always makes me want to whisper softly. (Same with your lovely poem!) Congratulations, Frederic!
Nunez Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 4:27 PM
Oh this is such a lovely sonnet on a lovely evening. One indeed feels miniscule when you contemplate the vastness and beauty of the sky and the constellations. Congrats, Frederic!
Mehta Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 5:52 AM
Nice poem well composed, congrats on the win, Frederic
A. Sharma Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 11:23 PM
Back again wid big congrats on this winning awesome write Frederic! So perfectly crafted !
A. Sharma Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 12:36 AM
This is amazingly beautiful Frederic! Really one of ur best ! perfect 7 and my fav! Gl in contest!
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 10:00 PM
Lots of gorgeous imagery, Frederic. did you get it entered in time? I think that contest filled up super fast!
Allison Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 6:24 PM
You painted a brilliant picture in my mind here Frederic - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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