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The Comforting Girlfriend Crew

THE COMFORTING GIRLFRIEND CREW

Poor little Pierrette is feeling nostalgic.
Sur la plage, she’d oft look for the boy friend.
Her countenance blue — in teen years tragic,
yet there’s safety in numbers, with girl friends.

Sur la plage, she’d oft look for the boy friend.
Down by the Riviera, whilst she shakes off blue sea
for there’s safety in numbers, with girl friends.
They say, “Won’t you dance the Charleston with me?”

Down by the Riviera, whilst she shakes off blue sea.
Ne’er perfect young ladies, wild with vigor,
They say, “Won’t you dance the Charleston with me?Fancy forgetting boyfriends and her perfect figure.

Ne’er perfect young ladies, wild with vigor,
dancing and eating all night pizza.
Fancy forgetting boyfriends and her perfect figure.
Quite unlike West Side Story - Maria.

Dancing and eating all night pizza,
forgetting mantra “I could be happy with you.”
Quite unlike West Side Story - Maria,
she listens to her comforting girlfriend crew.

Forgetting mantra “I could be happy with you.”
(Her boyfriend tried her in a room in Bloomsbury.)
She listens to her comforting girlfriend crew.
(Too old for her...this love’s imaginary.)

Her boyfriend tried her in a room in Bloomsbury.
Her countenance blue — in teen years tragic!
Too old for her...this love’s imaginary.
Poor little Pierrette is feeling nostalgic.

4/6/2018
Silent One’s Music Pantoum Contest
All songs in bold from the musical “The Boyfriend”
I was in this play in Middle School and I am feeling nostalgic.
Sur la plage — on the beach
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Thomas Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 8:34 AM
A very complicated pantoum Kim. Amazing write!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 11:41 AM
Thank you, Shadow!
Pandit Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 12:35 PM
Great Pantoum Kim..you blended the titles seamlessly..best for a win.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Thanks, Vijay! :)
Cunningham Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 10:21 AM
These pantoums look a bit daunting to me and I must say putting song titles into a verse is some achievement. You've done this very well Kim and good luck. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Thanks, Tom!:) Kim
Y. Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 9:13 AM
Hi Kim, I've never even heard of the Musical. However this well written Pantoum makes me want to see it. Good job. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 9:15 AM
When I hear the music it takes me back! :)
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