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The Colour Black

Black is not the colour
that you carry all round
to suit the rococo ground

Black is not just beautiful
it's the haunting memory
the big pool
of rococo fantasy;

It's not the playing ground
for harmony
to stay with you

He's playing 'round
the corners
playing 'round the colours
that won't suit your mood

Black is not just beautiful

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/26/2013 6:39:00 PM
A very interesting and unique poem. Every color is beautiful, but black is one of my favorites. A really great poem, Hanitra! I like it very much!...Thank you for the great comments on my poem. I really appreciate it!
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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/27/2013 11:32:00 AM
Thank you, dear Kelly! Have a nice day
Date: 10/23/2013 9:07:00 AM
I enjoy the elegance of black. I also enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 10/22/2013 3:00:00 PM
this is a very interesting one. I enjoyed the uniqueness of it. Keep those poems coming!!
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Date: 10/19/2013 6:02:00 PM
This is beautiful. I think all colors are beau5iful. You might want to check out My poem ( Color Me ). I think you will like it. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla
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