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The Colosseum

Gladiators fought there, Bleeding through the cheers, While tourists of today (like me!) Imagine all those years. The structure still stands proudly, Well, parts of it, at least, As cameras click where once were bouts Of human versus beast. We step on stones first placed there In the ancient days of Rome, Where Jewish slaves took eight long years To build it, far from home. We marvel at this masterpiece, At all that's still intact, Envisioning the action From the hints we can extract.

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Date: 3/4/2019 8:21:00 PM
Love especially the last stanza of this poem, Ilene. If you go to Italy again, you might want to see Pompeii and its excavations. I translated two letters of Pliny the Younger's eye witness accounts of Mt. Vesuvius (79 CE). His account of the horrors and devastation are not easily forgotten. / M
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Date: 2/28/2019 4:55:00 PM
Such an amazing sight to see Ilene and the tour guides bring these relics to life as you have done with your wonderful words:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 3/3/2019 5:48:00 PM
thanks, jan! yes, the tour guides were filled with so many interesting details i never would have known - they really added to the experience...
Date: 2/28/2019 3:13:00 PM
It sounds like you are enjoying some wonderful Roman ruins, in an exotic land on the other side of the hemisphere!
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Date: 3/3/2019 5:46:00 PM
yes, caren, i just got back from a trip to italy and i especially enjoyed all the ruins in rome. it's amazing to walk in places with so much history attached to them...

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